Question

I am writing an essay and need to know if its good or not. Essay is below.


There are many things that we can do to stop the bad things from happening. Including the migration itself, migration patterns, the amount of food that is being given, and what type of food to give. Bird migration is the regular seasonal movement, often north and south along a flyway, between breeding and wintering grounds. Migratory birds contribute important environmental benefits, including pollination, disease and pest control, carrion disposal and seed dispersal. Migration Patterns are also important. Bird migration is the regular seasonal movement, often north and south along a flyway, between breeding and wintering grounds. There are over 9,300 bird species worldwide, with South America claiming the most at around 2,500. If you're going to feed the birds, it all depends on the bird and the time of the year for what you're going to feed them.

Answer 1

actually that didnt work but i can share the doc for the review

Answer 2

Ok

Answer 3

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