Can some one read this and tell me if it is missing anything

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hhanan · Answer

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nNm-BW57_xkaUY9wKn2a2thEtzXbnUET31ROreUZGfA/edit?usp=sharing

lilbaddieeeeee · Answer

check the suggestions.

Shadow · Answer

Suspended him. That was annoying..

lilbaddieeeeee · Answer

$\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}$ @Shadow
Suspended him. That was annoying..
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Thank you, Shadow

Shadow · Answer

What is this for?

hhanan · Answer

$\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}$ @Shadow
Suspended him. That was annoying..
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what??

Shadow · Answer

Someone was either glitching or or purposefully commenting/not commenting on this post, which was making the user list for this question glitch out.

KillerUndeadDJ · Answer

ooh that's why i saw it glitching out

Shadow · Answer

Not sure what this essay is for but I fixed what grammatical errors I saw. There are two pretty large run on sentences that need to be shaped up and most of the other sentences have a similar tinge of run on. I don't know how to help you there, all I can suggest is to be more concise and exact with the ideas you're trying to get across. Extending a sentence too long exhausts the reader and makes them lose focus.

hhanan · Answer

thank you so much!!