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hhanan:

Can some one read this and tell me if it is missing anything

lilbaddieeeeee:

check the suggestions.

Shadow:

Suspended him. That was annoying..

lilbaddieeeeee:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Shadow Suspended him. That was annoying.. \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) Thank you, Shadow

Shadow:

What is this for?

hhanan:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Shadow Suspended him. That was annoying.. \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) what??

Shadow:

Someone was either glitching or or purposefully commenting/not commenting on this post, which was making the user list for this question glitch out.

KillerUndeadDJ:

ooh that's why i saw it glitching out

Shadow:

Not sure what this essay is for but I fixed what grammatical errors I saw. There are two pretty large run on sentences that need to be shaped up and most of the other sentences have a similar tinge of run on. I don't know how to help you there, all I can suggest is to be more concise and exact with the ideas you're trying to get across. Extending a sentence too long exhausts the reader and makes them lose focus.

hhanan:

thank you so much!!

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