Question

Y'all think you oughta know
What happens to me when you go home
But you don't bc I'm ready blow
Just a thorn on the end of a rose
Baby take a step back
Your a little too ....close
But I just need you to know

I love you but don't need you
I miss you but don't wanna see you
It hurts bc I'm something ur holding on too
But about your about to lose

I'm ready to blow......away
Every little ounce of pain
there ain't one thing that you can change
Even if you did it be the same
I'm sorry but you knew I was leaving anyway

(If y'all want I can complete this if y'all like it)

Answer 1

WOW.... this is really deep-hearted btw this would make a really good song.

Answer 2

o:

Answer 3

FELT OHMNDFKJLFKL FELT SO BAD DC FINISH IT OKADSLD PLEASEEE ITS GOOD

Answer 4

Aight okay I will y'all glad y'all really like it

Answer 5

Thats fire

Answer 6

ever thought bout joining soundcloud or even writing these to sell i think ur rlly good

Answer 7

not gonna cap this sounds amazing. you should make a song out of this and produce it. sounds awesome tho fr!!

Answer 8

niceee

Answer 9

join Matter

Answer 10

Very Noice c;Do I have you're permission to post it on my channel?

Answer 11

Yes u do

Answer 12

nice bruh

Answer 13

I didn't expect to get personally attacked reading that. Great job and I bet a lot of ppl can relate to that

Answer 14

My Boy DC! This is amazing my man!

Answer 15

dude this is amazing!

Answer 16

the fact i felt that- thats so good- 0.0

Answer 17

Thanks y'all. Going through a little something rn.

Answer 18

Im here if you need someone to talk to!

Answer 19

Always here for you homie @DCharger96 <3

Answer 20

AMAZING ^w^

Answer 21

Thank you all

Answer 22

oo nice job :)

Answer 23

Sorry to say somethings change
Like the way I feel
And the way you came
Into my life leaving burnt lights
All on my time
Now its time to say goodbye

Answer 24

DAYUMMMMMMMM HOMIE

Answer 25

thaz fireeee

Answer 26

Y'all think you oughta know
What happens to me when you go home
But you don't bc I'm ready blow
Just a thorn on the end of a rose
Baby take a step back
Your a little too ....close
But I just need you to know

I love you but don't need you
I miss you but don't wanna see you
It hurts bc I'm something ur holding on too
But about your about to lose

I'm ready to blow......away
Every little ounce of pain
there ain't one thing that you can change
Even if you did it be the same
I'm sorry but you knew I was leaving anyway

Sorry to say somethings change
Like the way I feel
And the way you came
Into my life leaving burnt lights
All on my time
Now its time to say goodbye

I ain't gonna let nobody sit here and waste my time
Everything I do is only for you but if you were the one to tell me the truth
Damn maybe I wouldn't be leaving you
Sometimes you gotta think things through even
Though I used to way before I met you

Answer 27

this hit different.

Answer 28

dang this is good

Answer 29

Those are really good, I would keep up the good work

Answer 30

bro i stg u betta not be talmbout me.........

Answer 31

OMGGG THIS IS AWESOMEEE

Answer 32

nice

Answer 33

I love it. It hard hard and I felt it.

Answer 34

That was amazing dude you could make millions go for it!

Answer 35

nice you should continue this. lot's of people are supportive and love it. I think you should continue with this amazing art. It's something your clearly very talented at. It's very emotion full and I am blown away.