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Extrinix:

What do yall think of this... (not finished by the way) \(\color{cyan}{\\ (slowed)~Will~you~love~me~when~you~die? \\ When~I~don’t~feel~like~cry’n? \\ When~I~give~up~my ~soul.~just~to~stop~the~pain~inside?- \\ But~I~could’ve~treated~you~differently~had~I~only~actually~tried- \\ I’ve~never~tried- \\ I’ve~heard~my~lies- \\ I~shouldn’t~be~here~with~you~tonight. \\ But~it~only~makes~me~worse~if~I’m~breaking~you~inside- \\ I’ve~hurt~you.~I’ve~broke~you. \\ I~knew~I~shouldn’t~have- \\ (mild~rap)~But~I~couldn’t~resist- \\ I~only~knew~the~best.~And~you~were~it. \\ But~I~couldn’t~hate~you~when~you~talked~like~s. \\ (slowed)~I~loved~you.~You~knew~that. \\ Nothing~would~ever~change~me~on~that.}\)

Mariahshygirl:

Ixz pretty good for a start!!! <3

Extrinix:

yea its my first one too

Mariahshygirl:

You did a very good job.

Extrinix:

thanks!

bribrithickthick2:

its good.

Extrinix:

thanks

Katrin369:

This is really good.

sxdsouls:

loved. im all abt it if it has the word `soul` in it

weebgirl:

this is amazing great job!!!

Extrinix:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @sxdsouls loved. im all abt it if it has the word `soul` in it \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) lol

Extrinix:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @weebgirl this is amazing great job!!! \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) *clicks bet response instead of quote* thanks!

weebgirl:

np

snowflake0531:

niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

BrokenMoon:

I LOVE IT BSF!!!

Kxylaaaaa:

Powerful........keep up the good work and it'll sound amazing when it's done

Astrid1:

It's Great! I'd recommend you to do more <3

psychace999:

Nice job ma boi keep going

TogaHimiko:

ree...

xXQuintonXx:

its pretty gud ngl lol

Username12:

I'm loving it!!!!!

Holly:

U are really good made me tear up

Extrinix:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BrokenMoon I LOVE IT BSF!!! \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) Thanks BM! <3

Extrinix:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Kxylaaaaa Powerful........keep up the good work and it'll sound amazing when it's done \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) I'll try and finish it

Extrinix:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1 It's Great! I'd recommend you to do more <3 \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) Thanks Asteroid ;)

Extrinix:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @TogaHimiko ree... \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) this is the reason we're in love. lol

TogaHimiko:

ree <:

Extrinix:

@xXQuintonXx @Username12 Thanks! @Holly it be like dat sumtimes tho

DumbFounded:

pretty good chief

xXQuintonXx:

yw

Extrinix:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @DumbFounded pretty good chief \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) thanks Commander

Holly:

@Extrinix I know but it hurts

Extrinix:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Holly @.Extrinix I know but it hurts \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) yea...

TogaHimiko:

ree <3

Holly:

@Extrinix I am here for u if u need anything

Extrinix:

thanks, but this wasn't \(really\) a song about me.... some parts it is... but most was just my thoughts yk

Holly:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Extrinix thanks, but this wasn't \(really\) a song about me.... some parts it is... but most was just my thoughts yk \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) Okay but still i am here for u and is just trying to be a friend

Extrinix:

mhm <3

TogaHimiko:

ree...<3

Extrinix:

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