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Astrid1:

Heyyy, So has anyone read the book The fault in our stars? If so, would you like to help me re-write teh ending after Gus's death?

snowflake0531:

ooh that's awesome, the book i mean

snowflake0531:

the ending is quite spectacular

snowflake0531:

gonna be hard to rewrite a better one lol

lilaspie7:

bby, you would have to read it to me. Cuz i have no clue what this book is.

Astrid1:

Yeah. DO you think you might be able to help me? @snowflake0531 I honestly just want several different perspectives on this c;

snowflake0531:

hmmm, i would want him to NOTTTTTTTTtt die lol, but it says after his death :/ oof

Astrid1:

Yeah, maybe if Houten were to die and then the assistant let say hires Hazel than maybe hazel writes the ending Hmmm.

Astrid1:

But hazel still gets Augustus's perspective on how the ending should be.

snowflake0531:

idk what to reply lol ig you should make van houten a better character at the end, and maybe to continue to write, still thinking about gus and his daughter? or was it hsi wife? i forgot lol

Astrid1:

I mean maybe we change Van houten into a non-alcoholic. He goes to rehab and then comes back for Augustus's funeral. And Van as he is at rehab he writes the end of the book, just bc of august's death and Hazels pain. (Btw Hazel was his GF not wife nor daughter) Even though I think August's and Hazel Had Yknow what.

snowflake0531:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1 I mean maybe we change Van houten into a non-alcoholic. He goes to rehab and then comes back for Augustus's funeral. And Van as he is at rehab he writes the end of the book, just bc of august's death and Hazels pain. (Btw Hazel was his GF not wife nor daughter) Even though I think August's and Hazel Had Yknow what. \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) when i meant wife or daughter, i was talking about houten's wife or daughter and i'll come on in half an hour, me gtg lol

Astrid1:

Okay, Van houten had a daughter and a wife? O-O

snowflake0531:

i don't remember lol

Astrid1:

I don't think he did.

snowflake0531:

i searched ti up, he had a daughter, which ig inspired him to write an imperial affliction

Astrid1:

True because his daughter I think died died of leukemia.

BabyGurl2006:

@LandonGoma

Astrid1:

How does this sound so far? It all happened at once. I was told Augustus was gone. Perished. It hurt me so much. I had given him everything, he had given me everything and yet he did it. He decided to not fight anymore. What happened? I got a call from his mother during the nighttime and she was sobbing. I had known what happened. I still couldn't believe it, the love of my life was gone. And I felt as if I was the one to blame.

Astrid1:

Tbh, it soundss more like a biography.

snowflake0531:

ummmm, to be honest i don't really think the part where, he 'decided' not to fight it anymore that would be a bit contradicting to Augustus's character and the former plot line

Astrid1:

Yeah, He did fight but he was in his car and didn't want her to call 911. So he was giving up.

XTHb:

i havent read it but sp0liers

Downpour17:

I haven't read it yet. Actually, I'm planning on reading it soon.

snowflake0531:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1 Yeah, He did fight but he was in his car and didn't want her to call 911. So he was giving up. \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) he wasn't giving up... he wasn't thinking that he couldn't be saved.... he just didn't want her to call 911 because he wanted hazel to fix it and so his parents didn't have to know anything. i mean, he went to buy cigarettes..

snowflake0531:

also, it was in the middle of the night lol

Astrid1:

True TruE

idkanymore1:

ggg g g ggg

DumbFounded:

spoiler much?

Astrid1:

I apologize but I need help with an assignment.

DumbFounded:

lmao its gud

TheBlackDragon:

Umm I haven't but umm I might read it

MxxnLight:

I haven't read it, but i'll be looking into it.

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