Question

Can someone check this and make sure everything looks good, it is for an essay.
I commented on parts I was not sure if I should change

Answer 1

where ?

Answer 2

https://docs.google.com/document/d/14ezbR-C3XAHBxL1u-BKmYez0OES8rLB71A0rSFPI6l4/edit?usp=sharing

Answer 3

NO

Answer 4

Why did I just read all that?
Lol

Answer 5

because that's how eyes work on certain occasions

Answer 6

Sure, ill be glad to help.

Answer 7

Is this a assignment for school?

Answer 8

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @nettym
Is this a assignment for school?
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ya

Answer 9

Okay so im really good at writing essays, Id prefer to use APA/MLA format, were any of those mentioned?

Answer 10

no i don't know what that is but it says to use google docs

Answer 11

To makes things a bit more professional, id recommend you to use Times New Roman font & font size 12, but it all depends on the requirements of your teacher! :)

Answer 12

Line spacing double would also help!

Answer 13

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @nettym
To makes things a bit more professional, id recommend you to use Times New Roman font & font size 12, but it all depends on the requirements of your teacher! :)
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I put those in already for her

Answer 14

Okay thanks! :)

Answer 15

She had several run-on sentences, I was reading it but you did well @nettym

Answer 16

I edited some stuff, but the thing is the sentences are a bit long. It keeps continuing with ¨and¨.

Answer 17

Im reading over it rn, it looks ok, just remember to have better grammar, and to use periods.

Answer 18

Also indent paragraphs

Answer 19

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Naughtyyy
Also indent paragraphs
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did that for her already. :)