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jhonyy9:

a destroyed love ... by jhonyy9 there is a torn letter in my memories a letter I never sent born of jealousy and foolish passion, let's read what the letter says now ... tell me why you love someone else and i just love you why are you happy for someone else like me but once life comes to me, why did you throw it away so easily tell me why you gave hope and so many dreams if you want happiness from someone else, tell me why you accepted my love heart and if you have just accepted it, why did you throw it away at the first moment you could have said, you could have spoken, let's not start, but you came with a fever and you fell to me in two arms, lying down to me that you don't love anything else your heart is mine see little farewell letter became the promise, but I'm tearing that little letter down now, if that's what you wanted so it doesn't hurt me ... there is a torn letter in my memories a letter I never sent born of jealousy and foolish passion, let's read what the letter says now ... tell me why you love someone else and i just love you why are you happy for someone else like me but once life comes to me, why did you throw it away so easily tell me why you gave hope and so many dreams if you want happiness from someone else, tell me why you accepted my love heart and if you have just accepted it, why did you throw it away at the first moment you could have said, you could have spoken, let's not start, but you came with a fever and you fell to me in two arms, lying down to me that you don't love anything else your heart is mine see little farewell letter became the promise, but I'm tearing that little letter down now, if that's what you wanted so it doesn't hurt me ...

jhonyy9:

so in reality this is a song ...

Shadow:

It's beautiful, and holds tragic pain within its verses. I listened to this whilst reading it because I felt it might fit upon a quick glance: https://soundcloud.com/mathew-steven-klein/loneliness-3-night-talking

justus:

Bravo, Jhonyy! Reading this gave me the chills but I love it.

zbz:

Ahh I love it!

JammarWalker:

Oh wow, this is amazing, I look at love from a different perspective now. So deep and open-hearted, I love it.

Ashley29:

Definitely felt that

AquarytheALPHA:

Oh my its so sad man who hurt you im soo sorry!

jhonyy9:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Shadow It's beautiful, and holds tragic pain within its verses. I listened to this whilst reading it because I felt it might fit upon a quick glance: https://soundcloud.com/mathew-steven-klein/loneliness-3-night-talking \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) yes - you feel it right - ty for this uploaded song

bryna321:

destroyed love?lmaoo does this lyrics belongs to u lol and its good

sxdsouls:

actually yum. This is like a mood

Mudasir:

Nice work

Shadow:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jhonyy9 yes - you feel it right - ty for this uploaded song \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) If you like it, I highly recommend watching the film it's from. It's called Her.

Mudasir:

Many kinds of destroyed.

Extrinix:

jhonyy this is your work of learning English, great job, and keep it up!

jhonyy9:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Shadow \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jhonyy9 yes - you feel it right - ty for this uploaded song \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) If you like it, I highly recommend watching the film it's from. It's called Her. \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) ok ty very much \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Extrinix jhonyy this is your work of learning English, great job, and keep it up! \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) wwwoooaaahhhhwwww ! ty - i dont thought on this way - but it s true ... ty

jhonyy9:

@XioGonz

AquarytheALPHA:

HEYYY

YeetesMeates:

dis sounds really nice ngl

XioGonz:

Wow. I feel like I can really relate to this...this is awfully solar to what I'm going through in real life. It really hurts, it's immensely painful. You have an amazing talent, and an exceptional way of expressing yourself. I'm sure that it's incredibly easy for you to express your emotion at all times. You should teach me how to. Great job Jhony. Thank you for this song. I'm looking forward to your future songs as well.

jhonyy9:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz Wow. I feel like I can really relate to this...this is awfully solar to what I'm going through in real life. It really hurts, it's immensely painful. You have an amazing talent, and an exceptional way of expressing yourself. I'm sure that it's incredibly easy for you to express your emotion at all times. You should teach me how to. Great job Jhony. Thank you for this song. I'm looking forward to your future songs as well. \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) ty very very much - appreciate your opinion - ty .

XioGonz:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jhonyy9 \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz Wow. I feel like I can really relate to this...this is awfully solar to what I'm going through in real life. It really hurts, it's immensely painful. You have an amazing talent, and an exceptional way of expressing yourself. I'm sure that it's incredibly easy for you to express your emotion at all times. You should teach me how to. Great job Jhony. Thank you for this song. I'm looking forward to your future songs as well. \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) ty very very much - appreciate your opinion - ty . \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) No problem, keep up the great work!

R3al:

This is really good @jhonyy9 I love it

babygirlimarie:

Thats amazing @jhonyy9 ! But damn that hit me hard asfffff.... Like I felt that

snowflake0531:

wow, just saw this

Extrinix:

This did truly hit hard.... it did....

elpapitocay:

deep -

simsharrison:

@jhonyy9 I feel this <3

Timmyspu:

Nice

babygurl22:

rlly nice it took be a bot to read it bc im a slow reader but love it

CuteTeddyUwU:

oh wow i love this

MidNiGhtSkY:

its amazing! good job :3

Mohammedzaid:

Amazing.. I loved it

Scorpion13:

nice work bro,really touched me

denkik123802:

i love it

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