Question

My essay tell me wut i need to add or change

Answer 1

where?

Answer 2

first paragraph

Answer 3

second

Answer 4

conclusion

Answer 5

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @TETSXPREME
where?
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
i just posted them child

Answer 6

@Hero

Answer 7

I think it's good, capitalization nd punctuation seems alright, not sure tho just ask other people if its alright, its good in my opinion

Answer 8

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @sxdsouls
I think it's good, capitalization nd punctuation seems alright, not sure tho just ask other people if its alright, its good in my opinion
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
ok thank you

Answer 9

np <3