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jhonyy9:

Wanderer ... by jhonyy9 as. A.J. Gábor started far from the ground, where does anyone know? seek the true one who blesses his heart, sometimes he stops thinking about the past, then he goes on, sighing big. what hides tomorrow, what awaits at the end of the road? does the old sand castle beautify or collapse? childhood dreams that accompany you, walking adventurous paths sometimes cheering you up. like a tired caravan wandering in the desert, what suffers from heat and lack of water, is far from purpose, but driven by a desire for success, so he breaks forward in the footsteps of his ancestors. when ? where? why? how long will he do all this? what is the guarantee that you will not wait for a cross at the end of the road? a big disappointment, what the future may hide, by the time he forgets, he doesn't think now. if so who knows how long it will last? terrestrial life is few, so far from the shore, maybe it's worth it and it won't be a bitter failure, even if the fight is tiring and difficult at the moment. dream only boldly happy nice future, trusting tomorrow to find him, never losing hope, reaching the end of the road finding the light. just act boldly you are not alone guarding your dreams reveals the sky, take care of your footsteps with the moon and stars, the sun and nature if adventures await. chirping birds encourage your footsteps, she's waiting for you somewhere to beautify your life, never give up, there is willpower, find the purpose of the true lover. a true lover is one who loves from the heart, whose dreams and desires are not limited by a framework, always knows how long and where destiny will take , a carefree rush is what makes you feel bad. upside down buddy! don't give up! must be trusted forever in success and light, you find him, the heart breaker, eternal happiness, the really lover.

sxdsouls:

I love how you make your poems Jhony, I love the part where it says `a true lover is one who loves from the heart, whose dreams and desires are not limited by a framework, always knows how long and where destiny will take , a carefree rush is what makes you feel bad. upside down buddy! don't give up! must be trusted forever in success and light, you find him, the heart breaker, eternal happiness, the really lover.` You know hot to write I could never, keep it up. I like your poems/ songs e.e

TETSXPREME:

i like it imma beg you to make more o; Please? C:

jhonyy9:

ok ty so much - really - i have a lot - but i need time to translate - and hope you understand in all what ,about my poems wan saying ...

jhonyy9:

@Laylalyssa here

Laylalyssa:

Wow, nice, great job~!

snowflake0531:

wowO-O

HaydenwH:

sounds nice ^.*

jhonyy9:

... a poem about my self to my self ...

HaydenwH:

XD

jhonyy9:

@XioGonz this is about i ve told

XioGonz:

It is truly amazing how the language you used at the end was reflecting upon the lines you said in the beginning, the power dynamic you began with flipped into something even more detailed and descriptive. This specific part really captured my attention: "never losing hope, reaching the end of the road finding the light. just act boldly you are not alone" You seem to know plenty about the rest of the world, it seems life has given you a whole lot to reflect upon and share with others. You have an amazing talent Jhony, I'm glad to have the opportunity to witness it too.

XioGonz:

Also, one more thing. No need to worry about the translation, it was completely understandable.

jhonyy9:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz Also, one more thing. No need to worry about the translation, it was completely understandable. \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) ok ty so much -

XioGonz:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jhonyy9 \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz Also, one more thing. No need to worry about the translation, it was completely understandable. \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) ok ty so much - \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) Np! (:

BrokenMoon:

i love this tysvm! I BEG YOU MAKE MOREEEEEE

MxxnLight:

You always impress us, Keep up the great work. 😎

06natrod52378:

It sounds good.

elpapitocay:

all the poems- so deep

jhonyy9:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @elpapitocay all the poems- so deep \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) on my profile on asked questions you can read more poems

elpapitocay:

ok bet

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