STORY DETAILS: What should I do with my story?
For three years, X watched everybody around him die. The only one left was his little sister, and he vowed to take care of her, but that too, was proving more difficult than expected. With zombies roaming the streets and a new mutation possibly taking place, X has no time for distractions. But when a mysterious man shows up who goes by the name of Y, then it all changes. X, Y, and L (lil sister) are kidnapped by a still standing tribe. This tribe belongs to J, and J has plans for the trio, and if they don't comply, then all will be lost.../?
can you put multiple people in a chat onhere/
For three years, he watched everybody around him die. The only one left was his little sister, and he vowed to take care of her, but that too, was proving more difficult than expected. With zombies roaming the streets and a new mutation possibly taking place, X has no time for distractions. But when a mysterious man shows up who goes by the name of Y, then it all changes. X, Y, and L (lil sister) are kidnapped by a still standing tribe. This tribe belongs to J, and J has plans for the trio, and if they don't comply, then all will be lost.../? Yes!! I made a small change in the beginning because you want the reader to earn the name at first. its like baiting. You make them read for the names. But yeah this looks great!
maybe give it more adjectives, but not TOO many ya know
whats an adjective?
oml
hmm
a describing word like instead of Kasy ran around the house, you would say Kasy daringly ran around the tretorus house.
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @VEYdSWAN whats an adjective? \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) A word that modifies a noun or describes a noun’s referent.
thanks homie
Np c:
C:
ah whats a noun? i just writereally, i dont know terms
sorry
do you need help writing?
A person place or a thing
cuz i can help u
maybe
i can share some of my personal peices with u if u want
i can get pretty deep when it comes to writing-
At the end of the world, there was a flash of light and a sound so loud you could hear the heavens ring out.
yeah thats good
so were just supposed just add more people to that story ?
it was a short thing, not a story, just a little typer
i mean not too many because that can get confusing
ima go, i gotta do school
you gotta make a scene where they accidentally bup into eachother, and get stuck in a makeout moment
c yah?
okee if anyone wants too see my peices, i might post them
do
How about you give the characters a goal
Instead of just surviving
Make it so they have to work and scout for something
Like lets say a survivor base
u do realize this is a bb relationship the story has right?
@KiWiPoP1 ?
Yeah ik that
But like, this still counts
but i do
i posted my peice if anyone wants to go check that out
a tribe 🤔
yea hes already doing a tribe
oh, then this post as well be closed ig
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @VEYdSWAN whats an adjective? \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) whats goin on with this mans XD
ikr
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @hunterrr11 \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @VEYdSWAN whats an adjective? \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) whats goin on with this mans XD \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) idk XP
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