Question

STORY DETAILS: What should I do with my story?

Answer 1

For three years, X watched everybody around him die. The only one left was his little sister, and he vowed to take care of her, but that too, was proving more difficult than expected. With zombies roaming the streets and a new mutation possibly taking place, X has no time for distractions. But when a mysterious man shows up who goes by the name of Y, then it all changes. X, Y, and L (lil sister) are kidnapped by a still standing tribe. This tribe belongs to J, and J has plans for the trio, and if they don't comply, then all will be lost.../?

Answer 2

can you put multiple people in a chat onhere/

Answer 3

For three years, he watched everybody around him die. The only one left was his little sister, and he vowed to take care of her, but that too, was proving more difficult than expected. With zombies roaming the streets and a new mutation possibly taking place, X has no time for distractions. But when a mysterious man shows up who goes by the name of Y, then it all changes. X, Y, and L (lil sister) are kidnapped by a still standing tribe. This tribe belongs to J, and J has plans for the trio, and if they don't comply, then all will be lost.../?


Yes!! I made a small change in the beginning because you want the reader to earn the name at first. its like baiting. You make them read for the names. But yeah this looks great!

Answer 4

maybe give it more adjectives, but not TOO many ya know

Answer 5

whats an adjective?

Answer 6

oml

Answer 7

hmm

Answer 8

a describing word like instead of Kasy ran around the house, you would say Kasy daringly ran around the tretorus house.

Answer 9

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @VEYdSWAN
whats an adjective?
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A word that modifies a noun or describes a noun’s referent.

Answer 10

thanks homie

Answer 11

Np c:

Answer 12

C:

Answer 13

ah whats a noun? i just writereally, i dont know terms

Answer 14

sorry

Answer 15

do you need help writing?

Answer 16

A person place or a thing

Answer 17

cuz i can help u

Answer 18

maybe

Answer 19

i can share some of my personal peices with u if u want

Answer 20

i can get pretty deep when it comes to writing-

Answer 21

At the end of the world, there was a flash of light and a sound so loud you could hear the heavens ring out.

Answer 22

yeah thats good

Answer 23

so were just supposed just add more people to that story ?

Answer 24

it was a short thing, not a story, just a little typer

Answer 25

i mean not too many because that can get confusing

Answer 26

ima go, i gotta do school

Answer 27

you gotta make a scene where they accidentally bup into eachother, and get stuck in a makeout moment

Answer 28

c yah?

Answer 29

okee if anyone wants too see my peices, i might post them

Answer 30

do

Answer 31

How about you give the characters a goal

Answer 32

Instead of just surviving

Answer 33

Make it so they have to work and scout for something

Answer 34

Like lets say a survivor base

Answer 35

u do realize this is a bb relationship the story has right?

Answer 36

@KiWiPoP1 ?

Answer 37

Yeah ik that

Answer 38

But like, this still counts

Answer 39

but i do

Answer 40

i posted my peice if anyone wants to go check that out

Answer 41

a tribe 🤔

Answer 42

yea hes already doing a tribe

Answer 43

oh, then this post as well be closed ig

Answer 44

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @VEYdSWAN
whats an adjective?
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whats goin on with this mans XD

Answer 45

ikr

Answer 46

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @hunterrr11
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @VEYdSWAN
whats an adjective?
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whats goin on with this mans XD
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idk XP