Question

Hi all!~

I have really wanted to write a song for a while, but no one was really committed to helping me write lyrics, so I came here!

I've always wanted the song to be from the perspective of a kid whose only friends are the things that are in his backyard, specifically bugs (I know it's weird, but I thought it would be cool.) I guess it's about being left out of group activities at a young age and that having an effect on your life.

Comment lyrics below!

Lookin' up to the sky
See the white clouds drift oo-on by.

Just a starter lyric /\

Answer 1

That sounds pretty good!

Answer 2

{pro tip} write a poem and sing it!

Answer 3

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @aevans182
That sounds pretty good!
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ty! it was just the first think that came to my mine

Answer 4

looks great so far

Answer 5

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @ENHZ
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @aevans182
That sounds pretty good!
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ty! it was just the first think that came to my mine
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I like it! I sing sometimes so if you come up with more lyrics I could sing it and you could see what rythym you want it in.

Answer 6

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @VEYdSWAN
{pro tip} write a poem and sing it!
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I've tried that but i can't put a melody to long poems, maybe it's a me thing

Answer 7

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @ENHZ
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @VEYdSWAN
{pro tip} write a poem and sing it!
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I've tried that but i can't put a melody to long poems, maybe it's a me thing
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oof

Answer 8

ill start on some more lyrics to keep advancing it

Answer 9

@ENHZ I sing sometimes so if you come up with more lyrics I could sing it and you could see what rythym and melody you want it in.

Answer 10

The sun shines brightly in the sky
The universe open, even if only for a night
Stay with me baby, if you leave i can't go on
So to convince you, I've witting this song,

lol i cant write well

Answer 11

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @VEYdSWAN
The sun shines brightly in the sky
The universe open, even if only for a night
Stay with me baby, if you leave i can't go on
So to convince you, I've witting this song,

lol i cant write well
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I like this! It's very romantic lol

Answer 12

Thank you

Answer 13

cool

Answer 14

Its amazing ( :

Answer 15

This is brilliant!! You may be a next song writer.. Keep going! your amazing.. This is a great start remember it comes from your heart <3 Heh!

Answer 16

Sounds amazing buh could use a lil work tho

Answer 17

Nice!

Answer 18

Oh bet i can help u write a song

Answer 19

Just a small piece of advice if this wasn't obvious, if youre making music with music, make sure its something you actually like, and don't make lyrics first, then find a beat to match, cause those rarely work out

Answer 20

Yk what I mean? Find your music first, then lyrics

Answer 21

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @kuromi
Yk what I mean? Find your music first, then lyrics
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I think that was perfectly said

Answer 22

HAI

Answer 23

You should write a poem and sing it or you can just sing a song if you want ts not my choice : D

Answer 24

It sounds really nice. Anything u write should come from the heart it is 10x more meaning full that way

Answer 25

Itz good ^^

Answer 26

noice

Answer 27

if you can figure out what words you're going to use i can help you make a beat for it, because what you're wanting to make a song about would be a great listen

Answer 28

cool

Answer 29

Good job ^^