Question

Just look over

Answer 1

@smukio

Answer 2

@smurkio

Answer 3

Ok so you got your evidence and i think your body paragraph explains it well you just have a couple grammar mistakes. One in your claim and another in your reasoning

Answer 4

ok imma read the closing now

Answer 5

I have no grammar mistakes though

Answer 6

read it over you'll see, you said "gen" instead of gin in one of them and then "ade" instead of "made"

Answer 7

oh

Answer 8

Ok so i think the closing looks good, just correct "termanated" to "terminated" and your all good

Answer 9

ok

Answer 10

it is good

Answer 11

thanks

Answer 12

yw

Answer 13

np