So I am writing an essay on service dogs and need someone to maybe proofread part of it and tell me if i need to add anything to make it flow better. I would really appreciate it.

What happens to service dogs when the owner is working or is in a business area? The service dog is allowed to go anywhere the handler goes. Service animals do not need to be certified or registered to qualify as service animals. Employees and staff are not permitted to require documentation from a handler that the animal is certified, trained, or licensed as a service animal as a condition for entry. A disabled person with a service dog can only be asked to remove their animal from the premises in limited circumstances. It is appropriate for staff members to ask a handler to remove their service dog if the dog is out of control or the dog is not housebroken...It is not appropriate to ask for a service dog to leave due to allergies or a fear of dogs. Under ADA guidance, if someone is allergic to a dog and needs to share space with a disabled person and their service dog, both people should be accommodated by assigning them where possible to different locations within the room or facility. a business can never charge a deposit or fee in connection with service dogs. If the hotel charges a fee for pets, it must waive that fee for a guest who is staying with a service dog. Hotels are also not allowed to charge service dog owners cleaning fees to clean up hair or dander shed by the dog. However, if the hotel or other business usually charges guests for damages, a handler can be held responsible for paying for any damage caused by their service dog. The staff member cannot require a doctor’s note, inquire about the handler’s disability, ask for an identification card or training certificate, and/or demand medical documents...In addition, staff members are not permitted to ask the handler to have their service dog demonstrate its ability to perform work for the owner. It is important to note as well that the two questions above are only allowed if the disability is not apparent. Service dogs can also go on planes with their handlers as a carry-on. This is because they need to be by their handler at all times. They usually are seen laying down at the handler's feet when on a plane and never in the seat unless the plane permits it.

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So I am writing an essay on service dogs and need someone to maybe proofread part of it and tell me if i need to add anything to make it flow better. I would really appreciate it.

What happens to service dogs when the owner is working or is in a business area? The service dog is allowed to go anywhere the handler goes. Service animals do not need to be certified or registered to qualify as service animals. Employees and staff are not permitted to require documentation from a handler that the animal is certified, trained, or licensed as a service animal as a condition for entry. A disabled person with a service dog can only be asked to remove their animal from the premises in limited circumstances. It is appropriate for staff members to ask a handler to remove their service dog if the dog is out of control or the dog is not housebroken...It is not appropriate to ask for a service dog to leave due to allergies or a fear of dogs. Under ADA guidance, if someone is allergic to a dog and needs to share space with a disabled person and their service dog, both people should be accommodated by assigning them where possible to different locations within the room or facility. a business can never charge a deposit or fee in connection with service dogs. If the hotel charges a fee for pets, it must waive that fee for a guest who is staying with a service dog. Hotels are also not allowed to charge service dog owners cleaning fees to clean up hair or dander shed by the dog. However, if the hotel or other business usually charges guests for damages, a handler can be held responsible for paying for any damage caused by their service dog. The staff member cannot require a doctor’s note, inquire about the handler’s disability, ask for an identification card or training certificate, and/or demand medical documents...In addition, staff members are not permitted to ask the handler to have their service dog demonstrate its ability to perform work for the owner. It is important to note as well that the two questions above are only allowed if the disability is not apparent. Service dogs can also go on planes with their handlers as a carry-on. This is because they need to be by their handler at all times. They usually are seen laying down at the handler's feet when on a plane and never in the seat unless the plane permits it.

axie · Answer

ill proofread it rq and let you know what i find!!!

axie · Answer

its pretty good, you need to remove more repetitive words that you use. other than that its pretty good.

KazGotFetee · Answer

$\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}$ @axie
its pretty good, you need to remove more repetitive words that you use. other than that its pretty good.
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I agree maybe not with the ... but yeah its Very good  Keep it up Honda i may have to take pictures of my German Shepard :)

KazGotFetee · Answer

If this is the end of your Essay Maybe a Conclusion and Counterclaim but yeah You're doing great!

Honda · Answer

$\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}$ @KazGotFetee
If this is the end of your Essay Maybe a Conclusion and Counterclaim but yeah You're doing great!
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i'm still working on a counterclaim

KazGotFetee · Answer

$\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}$ @Honda
$\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}$ @KazGotFetee
If this is the end of your Essay Maybe a Conclusion and Counterclaim but yeah You're doing great!
$\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}$
i'm still working on a counterclaim
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Then my Work here is complete and yours is just getting started good luck i hope to see this All finished!!!!!

KazGotFetee · Answer

You can now close this post unless you need more info and medal anyone you thought was most helpful have a good one

Imgoatedlikethat · Answer

This is very good so far

Imgoatedlikethat · Answer

Keep doing good :D

Hoodmemes · Answer

Looks pretty good