Question

What do yall Think of This Rap i Made:

How you turned to be my friend, And then you turned to be my enemy
I Turned you in disguise Because i thought you was a ken to me
Them devil in your eyes i swear to god you Not As big As me
you Threaten Me With Lies But My Promises is Reality
I see Go In The sky , in my dreams he looking after me
No matter when i cry he by my side cause he'll die for me
Nighas Down to ride and down to slide but won't look after me.

Answer 1

cool

Answer 2

God I meant to put*

Answer 3

Wow the flow looks nice, I wanna see this with a beat and everything

Glory go to god🙏👼🏾

Answer 4

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Thank you💖✨

Answer 5

finally someone put their post in the correct section lol, its great!

Answer 6

it's so good,good job

Answer 7

good job

Answer 8

It's nice :)

Answer 9

i gtta better one

Answer 10

pheriot boo

Answer 11

its nice

Answer 12

https://voca.ro/1mMS8PB4ZDat

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Answer 13

Good job

Answer 14

Periodt pooh💓 , This is hard I Love it

Answer 15

Thank you

Answer 16

@myiabhaddie i could rap this for you if you want to make it a track