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bralyn:

16) We worked with all of them to organize basin cleanups in order to get rid of the trash. (17) We climbed down the cliffs into the basin with shovels, trash bags, and spades to remove the trash left by irresponsible explorers. (18) We also used rocks to raise the banks of the stream so that water could flow through the basin once again. (19) Once we were finished, we waited for nature to get to work. 6. The meaning of sentence 16 is unclear. What change should Thomas make to improve the clarity of this sentence? Change all of them to our neighbors Change organize to plan Change get rid of to cancel Change the trash to it

Hewoo:

If you had to take a guess what do you think it would be?

bralyn:

c

bralyn:

@Icyhot

Hewoo:

Not quite? What can we eliminate

bralyn:

b

Hewoo:

Yes, Correct, do you think we can eliminate D?

bralyn:

no

Hewoo:

Why not?

bralyn:

give me medal and yes we can elinate it dont mind my slang

Hewoo:

We are trying to make the sentance more specific so we can eliminate D because it makes the sentance more vague and we want the sentance to be more destriptive

Hewoo:

So now its between A and C

bralyn:

so itz see .

bralyn:

c

Hewoo:

Not quite, C would make it less destriptive but A wouldnt it would change it to make sure we can understand who they are orginizing with. Do you understand that?

bralyn:

yes so a

Hewoo:

Yes, Correct

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