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jhonyy9:

Farewell by jhonyy9 as. A.J. Gábor Budapest ,Hungary We can say goodbye is always so hard With a painful heart, a hand now says goodbye, The minute is sad and the eyes are teary, "What is life worth at a time like this?" I ask. A thread breaks, the thread of friendship, What follows the big sigh of our hearts Because the heart hopes And it lives on, Distracting man from many bad thoughts. A yarn breaks, a love bond You think about it often, which is always beauty, For there is no torment in the heart of love, It is driven by desire, direction of victory. Gone are the love, what was the far walk, It was nice every minute, but it won't come back, Torn like a yellowish tree leaf in the fall, What breaks from his tree continues to blow with the wind. Anything bleak a heart shattered Every minute a sad and bitter taste, Because broken in vain, pounding empty So on the way to life aimlessly wandering. To say goodbye we know forever it's not allowed, Although the Earth seems to stand, but time is running out Because life is short, what to live happily Forgetting the grief, never to be afraid of the new. And when dawn dawns, the age of a new day And the ray of a new Sun shines in our lives, The landscape shines above in sparkling sunshine, Happy heart again which never hurts again. If the rays of the summer sun shine through your window, And love is on the doorstep knocking on you, Receive the wanderer, open the door in a hurry, Open your heart, so wait for the good news. Arriving at you, the sorrow goes away The pain of farewell can thus turn into happiness, And at the dawn of the new day the light shines, A new spark that goes on lives in Hope. Disappointment in love, a lot of fuss about nothing Farewell to tears, who knows why? All this in vain, life doesn't stop here It holds even for us tomorrow good and beautiful!

Astrid1:

This is really good👀😳❤️✌️

KynxKatz:

Oh wow 🤯

Timmyspu:

Your really good at this.

Trios:

Ah noice indeed

Florisalreadytaken:

Your manner of speaking is quite sterling and flawless. Not even ow if some person would tell me Max Ehrmann wrote this. Overall, it's fascinating. Well done mate!

jhonyy9:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Florisalreadytaken Your manner of speaking is quite sterling and flawless. Not even ow if some person would tell me Max Ehrmann wrote this. Overall, it's fascinating. Well done mate! \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) tysm - appreciate

kai6665:

That was the most detailed thing i have ever seen in mah life :0

TETSXPREME:

They considered me a fool ;c just cuz I dropped out high school I was just misunderstood

TETSXPREME:

very good o:

zbz:

What a masterpiece😮 Love it!

200082741:

Nicee

jhonyy9:

@Lilly47098 here

Lilly47098:

I love it!

jhonyy9:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Lilly47098 I love it! \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) ty

Lilly47098:

Yw!!!!!!

shototodorokii:

This is really nice.Good job!

emilyyyyyyyyyy:

Thats amazing and very detailed! Nice Job!

Hendrixapeals:

ngl jhonny it's amazing and painful. Got some real emotions

iluvAZ:

That story was yummy

LKylie:

awww i like it

ILYTID102:

soundd really good

200082741:

Itz rlly good but you can close this now lol

Slumpedk:

noice

Floo:

This is beautiful because it seems genuine. One thing that stood out to me was: "for there is no torment in the heart of love". True love "is" torment incarnate depending on how true the feeling is

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