Question

guys I really want to know if this poem is good enough to give to some one so tell me what you think do not mind the grammar and spelling

his sent is like the sun rise his eyes like the ocean his hair golden like the sun and his personality as kind as a child yet as mischievous as a teen even when he makes a mistake he always tries to fix it when other might just give up he always tries so hard to make others happy because he knows what it is like to feel like nothing he is my every thing he does not just make my day he is my day he is my sun that wakes me with joy and warms me through the cold from sun rise to sun set he is always there for me

Answer 1

is he a blonde?

Answer 2

yes

Answer 3

its good jaden

Answer 4

be honest is it really??

Answer 5

Pretty good, Nice job

Answer 6

thanks

Answer 7

yes it is, if its for someone u like, and from the heart

Answer 8

aww thanks and it is not for some one I just wanted to know if it was good bc I wrote this poem for my bf when I first told him I liked him and he broke up with me like 4 days ago for no reason and I was wondering if it was because I was no good enough

Answer 9

I LIKE IY

Answer 10

Its very good but its your choice to do it or not yk, like if you want to then do it, your incharge of you. Good luck!!!!!!!

Answer 11

pretty dope man, keep doing that, good work :D

Answer 12

thanks

Answer 13

and it is not for some one I just wanted to know if it was good bc I wrote this poem for my bf when I first told him I liked him and he broke up with me like 4 days ago for no reason and I was wondering if it was because I was no good enough

Answer 14

omg loving the poem and the emotions it really gets to u

Answer 15

aww thanks

Answer 16

thank you all so much for all that you have done

Answer 17

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jadenbreshears
aww thanks and it is not for some one I just wanted to know if it was good bc I wrote this poem for my bf when I first told him I liked him and he broke up with me like 4 days ago for no reason and I was wondering if it was because I was no good enough
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Dont write him a poem drop him

Answer 18

I wrote his this poem when we first got together

Answer 19

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Floo
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jadenbreshears
aww thanks and it is not for some one I just wanted to know if it was good bc I wrote this poem for my bf when I first told him I liked him and he broke up with me like 4 days ago for no reason and I was wondering if it was because I was no good enough
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Dont write him a poem drop him
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astaghfurillah

Answer 20

lolz I did not plan to give him the poem this is just what I wrote for him when we first got together

Answer 21

it good

Answer 22

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @hamidiso23
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Floo
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jadenbreshears
aww thanks and it is not for some one I just wanted to know if it was good bc I wrote this poem for my bf when I first told him I liked him and he broke up with me like 4 days ago for no reason and I was wondering if it was because I was no good enough
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Dont write him a poem drop him
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astaghfurillah
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Weirdo.

Answer 23

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Floo
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @hamidiso23
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Floo
u ik u r
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jadenbreshears
aww thanks and it is not for some one I just wanted to know if it was good bc I wrote this poem for my bf when I first told him I liked him and he broke up with me like 4 days ago for no reason and I was wondering if it was because I was no good enough
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Dont write him a poem drop him
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
astaghfurillah
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Weirdo.
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Answer 24

mk i get it now don't give him the poem got it the first time