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Floo:

The sun is fading The moon is falling God is away in his study lolling Man is proposing to his future wife The 21st century where fake depression runs rife Few birds come without a casket of quills Wanting to lay in a long field of daffodils Stay inside and pray to your end Come your funeral you shall attend

TETSXPREME:

smexy o;

TETSXPREME:

runs life*?

Floo:

no comprende

TETSXPREME:

what about switch the moon and sun part o;

TETSXPREME:

since sun does not fades away

TETSXPREME:

since the sun does not fade away*

Floo:

The sun does fade I am not following? Oh When I say fade I don't mean it in the literal sense. I mean fading out into the day

TETSXPREME:

no

TETSXPREME:

the sun does not fade away it just hide in clouds e.e

Floo:

okay lol.

Floo:

You can choose to take it literally if you please I don't mind, but it's just a poem

TETSXPREME:

but do whatever you think is best :) just giving idea

LouisAKALuis:

I like it

Floo:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @TETSXPREME but do whatever you think is best :) just giving idea \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) much appreciated

Floo:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @LouisAKALuis I like it \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) thank you

LouisAKALuis:

np

LouisAKALuis:

I cant even do that you sre doing SUCH a great job.

Floo:

It's a hobby turned talent, thank you

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