Question

opinions please :
Hope
by A.J. Gábor as. jhonyy9
Budapest - Hungary
Don't look for the truth of tomorrow today,
Don't want to understand the word of your future,
You can't save the Earth alone,
But you can give the child of Tomorrow a lot of hope.
Don't try to take back the mistakes of our ancestors
Don't look at the problems of your past in the rainbow,
Find the miracle in every raindrop,
See Hope for Tomorrow in every snowflake.
Comfort your heart, your soul with child laughter,
What will happen tomorrow? Do not be afraid ! deal with Today!
Because who Trusts, Hopes its light shines,
Following the path of Love, he always lives Happily,
Find the joy in dancing in the wind of a leaf,
And just always Love with immeasurable amounts.
I wish you find the meaning of your life,
Brave the love of your heart happily to those in need,
Because our life on Earth is short, never rush,
Trusted,Hopefully In love waiting for us many beautiful miracles !!!

Answer 1

ok I HATE READING

Answer 2

I love it, I love all of your writings, keep up the good work :)

Answer 3

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @0mega
I love it, I love all of your writings, keep up the good work :)
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
tysm

Answer 4

@Laylalyssa opinion pls - tysm-

Answer 5

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jhonyy9
@Laylalyssa opinion pls - tysm-
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Great job, i like it !!!

Answer 6

Awesomeee

Answer 7

Your doing amazing <3 I have no opinion except for this is awesome- and your talented Have A Wonderful And Brilliant day!! -Lily ^-^

Answer 8

ok

Answer 9

Nice work! I always look forward to reading your writings. :D

Answer 10

Amazing, amazing, amazing, never stop making poems like this, what you do with your words works wonders. Composition is very difficult and yet you make it seem so simple. Great job Jhony!

Answer 11

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
Amazing, amazing, amazing, never stop making poems like this, what you do with your words works wonders. Composition is very difficult and yet you make it seem so simple. Great job Jhony!
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
tysm. appreciate really your words - !!!

Answer 12

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jhonyy9
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
Amazing, amazing, amazing, never stop making poems like this, what you do with your words works wonders. Composition is very difficult and yet you make it seem so simple. Great job Jhony!
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
tysm. appreciate really your words - !!!
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Np! (:

Answer 13

👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽

Answer 14

cool i guses

Answer 15

Very nice

Answer 16

Nice Jhony, keep up the good work!

Answer 17

i love it keep up the good work

Answer 18

k

Answer 19

good start

Answer 20

I like it, it reminds me of a book called the alchemist. It is well structured and your word choice is good.

Answer 21

nice