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sophia333:

Should I continue this?

sophia333:

Chapter One: The beginning of the end. Kimmy approached the red, old, boring car and sat in it. “Mom when are we leaving?” She asked in an annoyed tone. “Right now.” Her mom answered as she put the keys in the ignition. The car stalled a few times then started up. Kimmy stayed silent for the majority of the car ride, staring at the different shades of the leaves on the trees. They soon entered a green, wooded, quiet area and they got out of the car. “You sure it’s here?” She asked, slightly confused. “I’m very sure my dear, we just need to find the burial place.” She answered as she looked around. The sky was getting dim with many shades of pink and orange. Kimmy approached a rock that had ‘JP+HW’ written on it. “Mom I found it..” She started digging up next to the football shaped rock. Soon enough, she had discovered a purple glowing orb. “Is this the orb you spoke of?” She asked her mom. “Yuppers, and it's still in great condition too!” She said in an excited tone. Kimmy picked it up and then the glowing orb floated in the air. “This has to be witchcraft- are we in a sci-fi movie or something and I don’t know it?” She said, as she was quite surprised at her discovery. “Nope, this is real-life stuff hun.” Her mom said giggling a bit. The orb then exploded and a bunch of lightning bolts emerged from it, forming glowing purple creatures who looked as if they were made from electricity. They both shrieked and started running towards the car. “THIS WASN’T SUPPOSED TO HAPPEN!” Her mom shouted, while she got inside the car. She started the car and drove off in a hurry. As they reached home, they were both sure that they had been hallucinating and they were to head to the ER in the morning. They both walked inside not saying a word to each other then they went straight to bed. They woke up the next morning from a rumble of the ground. “Earthquake?” Kimmy mumbled as she sat up in her bed. She walked off into her mom’s room and looked at her. “I think we had an earthquake…” Said Kimmy’s mom. They both got up and opened the door, only to find the world completely dark and cold. The wind was so violent the door almost flew off, then they hurriedly slammed it shut. “IT’S SO DARK OUTSIDE!” Kimmy cried. “DID WE DO THIS?” Kimmy’s mom said as she gasped for air.

Laylalyssa:

Yeeees

sophia333:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Laylalyssa Yeeees \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) Betttt~

xXGoldenMinaceXx:

if you truly desire i fully encourage yu

hamidiso23:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Laylalyssa Yeeees \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) yo layla why did u blocke me im solaimon

NeverAlone:

It's a good story. Once you edit and revise it, you could maybe even be the next J.K. Rowling.

Daddyglitch:

Sure

MrsHero:

yes plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

1234Robotnomore1234:

It's very good! Keep going.

emilyyyyyyyyyy:

ya keep going its amazing!

ItzLily:

Ofc! I'm hooked to this your an amazing writer <3 Omg ur so talented... Everyone is!! This preview is awesome <3

noneofyourbusiness:

mhm if u want to

sophia333:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @NeverAlone It's a good story. Once you edit and revise it, you could maybe even be the next J.K. Rowling. \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) Thank you.

sophia333:

Thank you all for the support, i shall continue writing!

hamidiso23:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @sophia333 Thank you all for the support, i shall continue writing! \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) yes plz

Grace2000:

YES

bella14:

Yes i like it @natalija

Natalija:

yes omg !

Ashely:

Yes for sure

TheBlackDragon:

Sure

nofearkillion:

yes you should continue your dreams

nofearkillion:

what ever makes u happy u go for it

AnimeDude1738:

whatever U r good at keep doin it

Mez666:

yes. if it's something you love you should pursue it

BrokenMoon:

PLZ CONTINUE

200082741:

Yessssssssssssssssssss

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