Question

Here is the start of my blog, what more shuld I get into? Chapter two, is about me since birth and what I've been through. This is just a short part of chapter one.



" Today is Sunday, April 7th. It is 2021, and this school year is almost over. I don't want it to come. I know, I sound crazy, but I might be moving next year, and all my friends are on this very laptop. And soon enough, I'll never hear from them. We may be planning to see each other, but I have a feeling we won't.

Overtime, I have became fond of my friends. They're like family, something I cannot get rid of. But, sometimes you have to lose the ones you love to move a step forward. I'm going to hate to see them go, but I have to get out of this filthy house. (The house ain't up to standards!!)

I've always wanted to help people that're suicidal, psychotic, morally anybody. I just want to be there for the people that need it the most, and that's good I guess, but I haven't been taking care of my life. So I am writing a blog, (daily) and it will show you how to bring closure and accept your standards."

Answer 1

Goddamn you hit that straight to my heart...

I would say go into your personal story, what's going on in your life currently, how you wish things would change from this to that, etc.

Answer 2

Yeah.

Thanks for the feedback, Joshy!

Answer 3

One correction * April 11th