Question

is this a poem welp i try my best
i imagine spending my time with u 👀
i know they just dreams that can never come truee💭 😔

i see you with other girls 😒
for me it feels werid i might act all normal bc i wanna see u happy 😊 😕

sumthing i wanna say my feeling to u but i feel u will reject me 😐 😓

it hurts more knowing the i cant tell u how i feel 😣

each day i try forget about u but next thing i see couples 👩‍❤️‍👨 i even wanna scream but it not their fault not all people same 😿

no one can changed that too 😪

it liked a broken galss the can never be normal again 😟💔

but ik one day u will know the truee 🥺 😊 💗

Answer 1

This is really good, I would mess around with word choice a bit, ill provide some examples of poems i wrote.. but good job :))

Answer 2

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @nettym
This is really good, I would mess around with word choice a bit, ill provide some examples of poems i wrote.. but good job :))
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ooo okay thx for the advice

Answer 3

nice nice

Answer 4

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @mrdeepvoice
nice nice
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thx 😊

Answer 5

that's very very good :)

Answer 6

Very good, I can relate to this poem. <3

Answer 7

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @domingo
that's very very good :)
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thx first time 😆

Answer 8

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1
Very good, I can relate to this poem. <3
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thx i appreciate it 💗

Answer 9

i really love this poem i think ima send it to my crush ngl 🥀

Answer 10

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @itscheyenne2020
i really love this poem i think ima send it to my crush ngl 🥀
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awww thx best comment i had 🥺 💖