Question

here is a song i wrote

Have you ever had the feeling
That you inside your heart
It goes pitter patter
Making your feelings scatter
With every beat of your heart
Every time you close your eyes
Do you picture you love for me
You don’t have to see to believe
That your love is strong enough
Cause you have seen my worst days
You have seen my best days
You have helped me find my way
Through this dark world
Ohh-ohh
Every time you close your eyes
Do you picture you love for me
You don't have to see to believe
that you love is strong enough
Oh you have always been there for me
And every time i close my eyes
I picture my love for you
I don't have to see to believe
That my love is strong enough
You Have brightened my day
And my world in a way
You always make me laugh
And you share my pain
Ohh-ohh
Every time you close your eyes
Do you picture your love for me
You don't have to see
To believe cause i know your love
Is strong enough
Oh you love is strong enough
Cause every time i close my eyes
I picture my love for you
I don't need to see
To believe that my love is strong enough

Answer 1

please rate

Answer 2

Ooo! that's a 10/10!

Answer 3

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BabydollBlake
Ooo! that's a 10/10!
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thank you!!!

Answer 4

very nice
a bit of music to match and you'll have a great song all the way around

Answer 5

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @lanasguy
very nice
a bit of music to match and you'll have a great song all the way around
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thank you very much and right now im working on some music to it

Answer 6

90/100 just some grammer you need to fix but its cool

Answer 7

Thats really good.

Answer 8

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @emilyyyyyyyyyy
Thats really good.
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thank you!

Answer 9

great nice song

Answer 10

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @AnimeDude1738
great nice song
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thanks

Answer 11

Also when you post lyrics you put it in writing or literature And its really good

Answer 12

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @iiMaddii
Also when you post lyrics you put it in writing or literature And its really good
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thank you

Answer 13

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @weebgirl
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @iiMaddii
Also when you post lyrics you put it in writing or literature And its really good
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thank you
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Your Welcome And Maybe one day maybe you could help me writing a song .

Answer 14

yeah ok i could help you

Answer 15

this is really amazing keep it up.

Answer 16

100/10 keep it up love it

Answer 17

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @bri05
100/10 keep it up love it
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thank you very much

Answer 18

i like it

Answer 19

do u have a beat for it??

Answer 20

@ELiGiO no not yet im still working on it

Answer 21

Oh and i didn't see when you said rate it but 100/10

Answer 22

i like how its goin

Answer 23

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @iiMaddii
Oh and i didn't see when you said rate it but 100/10
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thank you

Answer 24

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @weebgirl
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @iiMaddii
Oh and i didn't see when you said rate it but 100/10
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thank you
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Yw

Answer 25

Cool, i like it it's good.!

Answer 26

yepp

Answer 27

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Shi15
Cool, i like it it's good.!
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thank you very much

Answer 28

@weebgirl how many songs do u have??

Answer 29

5 i think tho one of them is just a messed up version of the 12 day of christmas

Answer 30

i make songs too i made like over 50

Answer 31

dang thats alot!

Answer 32

yepp

Answer 33

and do u actually sing or is it like a rap or sumthing??

Answer 34

i dont sing but best friend does and this song is for band

Answer 35

dats wassssup but i was tryna find how it flowed

Answer 36

okay wow i felt that.. that was really good

Answer 37

oh its like a slower song

Answer 38

iight bettt

Answer 39

`It goes pitter patter `

this is from another song-

Answer 40

what u talm bout??

Answer 41

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @sxdsouls
`It goes pitter patter `

this is from another song-
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its from one of Ke$shas song

Answer 42

Cannibal,








make sure to not plagiarism

Answer 43

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @sxdsouls
Cannibal,








make sure to not plagiarism
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ok srry

Answer 44

@PapiPablo check out my song pls

Answer 45

100/100

Answer 46

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @PapiPablo
100/100
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thank you very much!!!

Answer 47

it's amazinggggggg

Answer 48

10/10

Answer 49

nice

Answer 50

10/10 i like it alot!

Answer 51

i love this it's sooo good, good job

Answer 52

9/10, maybe some words could be changed idk which tho

Answer 53

10/10 I love it great job ^^

Answer 54

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @JoyD
it's amazinggggggg
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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @JoyD
10/10
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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @branpops
nice
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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Kylo
10/10 i like it alot!
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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @EmilyHerron
i love this it's sooo good, good job
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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @SweetKai
9/10, maybe some words could be changed idk which tho
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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @200082741
10/10 I love it great job ^^
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Thank you all so much!!!!

Answer 55

damn i love itt

Answer 56

Nice song

Answer 57

that's a really good song I write songs myself so I like to hear when someone else does the same. (also I'm totally fanning you!)

Answer 58

green

Answer 59

10/10 good stuff.

Answer 60

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @nofearkillion
damn i love itt
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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @AnimeDude1738
Nice song
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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @CurtisGilstrap
that's a really good song I write songs myself so I like to hear when someone else does the same. (also I'm totally fanning you!)
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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @CrazyCrimson
green
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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @CHRISSSSSSS
10/10 good stuff.
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Thank you very much :)

Answer 61

your welcome!

Answer 62

im blown away muy fantastico

Answer 63

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @bizaardvark
im blown away muy fantastico
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thank you

Answer 64

great song add some drums bass and piano it would turn it up a notch

Answer 65

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jakfishman
great song add some drums bass and piano it would turn it up a notch
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thank you

Answer 66

DAM THATS REALLY GOOD YOUR AN VERY GOOD ARTIST

Answer 67

we should do a duo i do music to if u look me up on the internet by astrus songs those are my songs

Answer 68

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Dallasbmxboyy
DAM THATS REALLY GOOD YOUR AN VERY GOOD ARTIST
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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Dallasbmxboyy
we should do a duo i do music to if u look me up on the internet by astrus songs those are my songs
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ok i will and thank you very much!

Answer 69

Thats a really good song!

Answer 70

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @TaleighaCutie
Thats a really good song!
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thanks

Answer 71

I love all the emotions and how you can really tell what you were feeling at the time you wrote it. It is truly amazing and beautiful. A song worth the world. 100/10

Answer 72

Great tbh I feel like dat half of the time

Answer 73

It's soo good ^^

Answer 74

this is actually very nice, great work

Answer 75

its good but you said heart
It goes pitter patter
Making your feelings scatter
With every beat of your heart and i think that it used the word heart a lot but i think 8/10

Answer 76

10/10 pretty good in my opinion.

Answer 77

@weebgirl plz do not copy right

Answer 78

thaks

Answer 79

Wdym?