Question

Hey guys i'm writing on a song Called "All I Really Want", and i would love some pointers and/or suggestions please and thank you:)

"All I really want"

I tried to hide my fear
When it would come out,
you were there to dry my tear
You said no don't cry, I don't wanna see my baby cry
Cause then i'm gonna feel bad,
What do u wan me to do baby (woah)

(possible chrous): I said Just hold me
and tell me every things gonna be ok
Cause that's all I really want,
All I really want from you

Answer 1

oop there were sum miskatkes in that one here i fixed it loll "All I really want"
I tried to hide my fear
When it would come out,
you were there to dry my tears
You said no don't cry, I don't wanna see my baby sad
Cause then i'm gonna feel bad,
What do u wan me to do baby (woah)

(possible chrous): I said Just hold me
and tell me every things gonna be ok
Cause that's all I really want,
All I really want from you

Answer 2

It's okay, although I'd come up with some better words for what you're trying to describe :)

Answer 3

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Shayla
It's okay, although I'd come up with some better words for what you're trying to describe :)
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loll yea im still working on it, but yeaa i was think the same thing loll Thank for your input:)

Answer 4

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Alyzarose
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Shayla
It's okay, although I'd come up with some better words for what you're trying to describe :)
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loll yea im still working on it, but yeaa i was think the same thing loll Thank for your input:)
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Ofc

Answer 5

Same its cool but i dont really see what you mean when you say thats all you really want as your song title if you dont put it in the song. But is good.

Answer 6

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Renne
Same its cool but i dont really see what you mean when you say thats all you really want as your song title if you dont put it in the song. But is good.
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loll it is in the song but thank you:)

Answer 7

I be tripin sorry

Answer 8

hahah lolll its okii:)

Answer 9

kk i'll be back with somemore pointers ok? stay cool see you later

Answer 10

oh okii thank youu:) and okii see u laterr

Answer 11

I think its great.

Answer 12

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @marleymorgan
I think its great.
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oh aww thx mar:) im tryin lol XD

Answer 13

np :)

Answer 14

:)

Answer 15

I love it frfrff :*

Answer 16

Its pretty good!!

Answer 17

I mean I'd deff listen to it

Answer 18

it doesn't rhyme

Answer 19

but its ight

Answer 20

Oop

Answer 21

Love could be included U could never get enough of dat

Answer 22

after, all i really want from you you could say
is to be there for me too

Answer 23

Lyrics Go in the writing or literature place And its Good

Answer 24

its acceptable

Answer 25

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @MrsHero
I love it frfrff :*
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lolll Thank you:)

Answer 26

Hey Alyzarose

Answer 27

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @DiegoSmith
its acceptable
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lolll thanks for accepting it xd :)

Answer 28

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @20093847567
Hey Alyzarose
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Hiii:)

Answer 29

lol you welcome

Answer 30

:)

Answer 31

Its good but I made a few changes tell me how you like it :)

"All I really want"

I tried to hide my fear...
I tried to hold back..my tears back
When it would come out,(come out)
you were there to make me smile
You said "no don't cry, I don't wanna see my baby cry no not this time"
you said "What do u want me to do baby, cause " (woah)

(possible chrous): I said Just hold me, hold me please
and tell me every things gonna be ok
just hold me hold me plz
and keep me in your arms
yea thats all I want
{beat drop}
Cause that's all I really want,
All I really want from you


hope you like it

Answer 32

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @JoyD
Its good but I made a few changes tell me how you like it :)

"All I really want"

I tried to hide my fear...
I tried to hold back..my tears back
When it would come out,(come out)
you were there to make me smile
You said "no don't cry, I don't wanna see my baby cry no not this time"
you said "What do u want me to do baby, cause " (woah)

(possible chrous): I said Just hold me, hold me please
and tell me every things gonna be ok
just hold me hold me plz
and keep me in your arms
yea thats all I want
{beat drop}
Cause that's all I really want,
All I really want from you


hope you like it
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mhmmm, its pretty good wow thank youu:)

Answer 33

Your Welcome, I am happy I was able to help

Answer 34

even more acceptable

Answer 35

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @JoyD
Your Welcome, I am happy I was able to help
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yesss thank youu:)

Answer 36

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @DiegoSmith
even more acceptable
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hahah ikr loll XD

Answer 37

@Alyzarose
if you want more help, let me know I will be Happy to help as much as I can

Answer 38

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @JoyD
@Alyzarose
if you want more help, let me know I will be Happy to help as much as I can
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Yassss okay thank youu, fsfs I'll let you know:)

Answer 39

@Alyzarose
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Answer 40

its cool i dont have much experience im trying to write my first song right now . but so far i like it

Answer 41

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Kylo
its cool i dont have much experience im trying to write my first song right now . but so far i like it
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oh thats coool, im sure your great, and thank you:)

Answer 42

it's really good it almost made me cry

Answer 43

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @new2luv
it's really good it almost made me cry
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i shed a tear of joy to this on how pog it is

Answer 44

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @new2luv
it's really good it almost made me cry
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awwwww:) thank you

Answer 45

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Kylo
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @new2luv
it's really good it almost made me cry
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i shed a tear of joy to this on how pog it is
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lolll i shed a tear writing it XD

Answer 46

you should sing it and ad a beat to it

Answer 47

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Kylo
you should sing it and ad a beat to it
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loll yas fsfs once im done and i figure out the melodys and stuff ill post me singing it

Answer 48

das lit

Answer 49

ike it alot

Answer 50

i like it

Answer 51

lolll Thank youuuu:)

Answer 52

im glad u like it:)

Answer 53

Its good but is this is the music group ?

Answer 54

Its really good but is it ?

Answer 55

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Answer 56

Music Group Rules :)

Answer 57

So post lyrics at WRITING or LITERATURE please

Answer 58

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @iiMaddii
So post lyrics at WRITING or LITERATURE please
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ooop my bad lol thx:)

Answer 59

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Alyzarose
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @iiMaddii
So post lyrics at WRITING or LITERATURE please
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ooop my bad lol thx:)
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Yw!

Answer 60

:)

Answer 61

GO BESTIEEE!!!

Answer 62

awwwwwww thx bestieeeee!!!

Answer 63

THAT"S MY BEST FRIEND LOL!!!

Answer 64

bhahahah lolll thats my bestieee lolll u funnny!!!!

Answer 65

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Alyzarose
awwwwwww thx bestieeeee!!!
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Your Welcome

Answer 66

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Alyzarose
bhahahah lolll thats my bestieee lolll u funnny!!!!
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LOL

Answer 67

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @EmilyHerron
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Alyzarose
awwwwwww thx bestieeeee!!!
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Your Welcome
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:)

Answer 68

love it

Answer 69

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @bri05
love it
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Thank youu:)

Answer 70

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Answer 71

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @TheBlackDragon
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loll thx XD

Answer 72

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Alyzarose
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @TheBlackDragon
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loll thx XD
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lol

Answer 73

Good!!!

Answer 74

Than Youu:)

Answer 75

Thank*

Answer 76

Great job, i love it c; <3

Answer 77

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dontsaymyname
Great job, i love it c; <3
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Aww Thxxxxxx BSFFFF!!

Answer 78

Hey @walk u like the song or..

Answer 79

lollll

Answer 80

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @EmilyHerron
Hey @walk u like the song or..
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u gonna reply lol

Answer 81

It's really great! but- if you made it longer it'd sound more like a song then a poem :)

Answer 82

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @miyadauglyrat
It's really great! but- if you made it longer it'd sound more like a song then a poem :)
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she's planning on making it a song lol

Answer 83

I like it if u really keep trying u can be a real singer but it should be longer

Answer 84

I really like it

Answer 85

its a good song but i think it sounds better as a poem than a song

Answer 86

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Alyzarose
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @MrsHero
I love it frfrff :*
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lolll Thank you:)
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awe so sorry im late but ywwwww :*

Answer 87

Its rlyy good, and same i'd also listen to it!!!😉😁

Answer 88

methane gas

Answer 89

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Zyzy1
I like it if u really keep trying u can be a real singer but it should be longer
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loll yea its a song but so far that all i have, but thank youu:)

Answer 90

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @CrazyCrimson
methane gas
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hahah i have no idea wut that means but thank you XD

Answer 91

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Mexy
Its rlyy good, and same i'd also listen to it!!!😉😁
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THXX:)

Answer 92

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Alyzarose
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @CrazyCrimson
methane gas
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hahah i have no idea wut that means but thank you XD
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😂😂😂

Answer 93

lollllll

Answer 94

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @CrazyCrimson
methane gas
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what does that mean lol

Answer 95

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @EmilyHerron
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @CrazyCrimson
methane gas
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what does that mean lol
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Yesss please tell say wut that means XD lolll

Answer 96

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Alyzarose
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @EmilyHerron
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @CrazyCrimson
methane gas
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what does that mean lol
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Yesss please tell say wut that means XD lolll
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Well ig our question will be unanswered LEL😂😂😂

Answer 97

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @EmilyHerron
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Alyzarose
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @EmilyHerron
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @CrazyCrimson
methane gas
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what does that mean lol
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Yesss please tell say wut that means XD lolll
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Well ig our question will be unanswered LEL😂😂😂
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IKRRRRRR!!!!!!! lolll I guess we'll never know XD 😂

Answer 98

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Alyzarose
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @EmilyHerron
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Alyzarose
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @EmilyHerron
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @CrazyCrimson
methane gas
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what does that mean lol
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Yesss please tell say wut that means XD lolll
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Well ig our question will be unanswered LEL😂😂😂
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
IKRRRRRR!!!!!!! lolll I guess we'll never know XD 😂
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Well now we now what this means LOL

Answer 99

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @EmilyHerron
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Alyzarose
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @EmilyHerron
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Alyzarose
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @EmilyHerron
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @CrazyCrimson
methane gas
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what does that mean lol
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Yesss please tell say wut that means XD lolll
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Well ig our question will be unanswered LEL😂😂😂
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
IKRRRRRR!!!!!!! lolll I guess we'll never know XD 😂
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Well now we now what this means LOL
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loll well boys and girls its an elemnt XD

Answer 100

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @EmilyHerron
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Alyzarose
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @EmilyHerron
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Alyzarose
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @EmilyHerron
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @CrazyCrimson
methane gas
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what does that mean lol
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Yesss please tell say wut that means XD lolll
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Well ig our question will be unanswered LEL😂😂😂
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
IKRRRRRR!!!!!!! lolll I guess we'll never know XD 😂
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Well now we now what this means LOL
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Know*

Answer 101

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Alyzarose
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @EmilyHerron
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Alyzarose
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @EmilyHerron
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Alyzarose
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @EmilyHerron
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @CrazyCrimson
methane gas
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what does that mean lol
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Yesss please tell say wut that means XD lolll
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Well ig our question will be unanswered LEL😂😂😂
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
IKRRRRRR!!!!!!! lolll I guess we'll never know XD 😂
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Well now we now what this means LOL
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loll well boys and girls its an elemnt XD
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I'm dead LOL

Answer 102

LOLL

Answer 103

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Alyzarose
LOLL
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did u get more lyrics?

Answer 104

No offense, but I'm not sure if this is allowed because all questions are supposed to be school related. I suggest that you close it before you get banned.

Answer 105

i like it

Answer 106

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @TaleighaCutie
No offense, but I'm not sure if this is allowed because all questions are supposed to be school related. I suggest that you close it before you get banned.
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it is allowed if it put in music read the rules

Answer 107

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Kylo
i like it
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Thank You:)

Answer 108

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @TaleighaCutie
No offense, but I'm not sure if this is allowed because all questions are supposed to be school related. I suggest that you close it before you get banned.
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oh loll its allowed, dont worry i wont get banned:), ive done this before so it fine:)

Answer 109

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @TaleighaCutie
No offense, but I'm not sure if this is allowed because all questions are supposed to be school related. I suggest that you close it before you get banned.
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heh i love it when the new people try and tell us the rules, its very Entertaining. Btw this is not against the rules aslong as you put it in the right section, which it is

Answer 110

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @axie
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @TaleighaCutie
No offense, but I'm not sure if this is allowed because all questions are supposed to be school related. I suggest that you close it before you get banned.
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heh i love it when the new people try and tell us the rules, its very Entertaining. Btw this is not against the rules aslong as you put it in the right section, which it is
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
bhahahahahahah LNMOOOO IKRRRR your tellin me XD, i get so entertained and so flabergasted XD

Answer 111

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Alyzarose
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @axie
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @TaleighaCutie
No offense, but I'm not sure if this is allowed because all questions are supposed to be school related. I suggest that you close it before you get banned.
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
heh i love it when the new people try and tell us the rules, its very Entertaining. Btw this is not against the rules aslong as you put it in the right section, which it is
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
bhahahahahahah LNMOOOO IKRRRR your tellin me XD, i get so entertained and so flabergasted XD
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
OU big words niceee XD

Answer 112

now i cant stop saying flabergasted

Answer 113

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @axie
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Alyzarose
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @axie
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @TaleighaCutie
No offense, but I'm not sure if this is allowed because all questions are supposed to be school related. I suggest that you close it before you get banned.
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
heh i love it when the new people try and tell us the rules, its very Entertaining. Btw this is not against the rules aslong as you put it in the right section, which it is
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
bhahahahahahah LNMOOOO IKRRRR your tellin me XD, i get so entertained and so flabergasted XD
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
OU big words niceee XD
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bhahaha yass ikrrr such a big vocabulary XD

Answer 114

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @axie
now i cant stop saying flabergasted
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hahahah ikrrrrrr xd

Answer 115

Idk

Answer 116

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Daddyglitch
Idk
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loll alr thxx:)

Answer 117

well yk imma professional......so its good u have the a,v pattern to keep listerners jhooked....however its rather short with the chourus being un noticable

Answer 118

**a,b not a,v

Answer 119

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Shawnte
well yk imma professional......so its good u have the a,v pattern to keep listerners jhooked....however its rather short with the chourus being un noticable
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thxx and yea loll ik its short thats all i have so far, im trying to write at least 2 verses and a bride and a better chorus. but thxx:)

Answer 120

u should do verse1 chourus verse 2 3 chourus verse 4 bridege chourus

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lolll thats exactly wut im doinn ayye loll thx:)

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pheriottttt good job n btw im xXgoldenminaceXx

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cant remember if i tty here or on tht acc

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but mabey more like verse 1 chorus verse 2 and 3 chorus bridge and then back to chorus

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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Shawnte
pheriottttt good job n btw im xXgoldenminaceXx
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ohh heyyyyyyyyyy

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yea we talked on xXgoldenminaceXx lolll

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do yk wht the bridge is........its like.....well idk how to explain it buh there very noticalbe n songs

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loll yess ik wut the bridge is ive been doing this since i was really little loll, but its kinda the breakdown of the song it is hard to explain loll

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yea i was bouta exolain it to u buh i was like uhhhhhhhh

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bhahaha lollll its all goood xd thxxxx:)

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now imma stp textin u cuh ik ffrom experience tht its annoyin af gettin ur notifications blown up like tht

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lollll nahh your good its oki i enjoy the help XD

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mkkkk just dm dont do tht to peoples notifications ik it gets annoying

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I think thinking of the name of this song, about what you feel, will help you continue to write down more lyrics.

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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @yoboijarvis
I think thinking of the name of this song, about what you feel, will help you continue to write down more lyrics.
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oh cooool sure thx:)

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np

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alyza this was just so in depth and flawless. Can we collaborate sometime?

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It would be so amazing to work on a lyrics with u (:

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Wow! I really like it.

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My heart is being tugged, by this. I love it

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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @thoughfulsky
alyza this was just so in depth and flawless. Can we collaborate sometime?
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awww thank you so much and yas fs that good be coool

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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XLynx
Wow! I really like it.
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Thankkk YOUUU:)

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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Shuki
My heart is being tugged, by this. I love it
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awwwww thats so sweet and thank youuu!!:)