Question

Hello everyone! I need your help!

I have to add the final touches to my argumentative essay, but I can't seem to find any missing places.

Here are the things you can look for and tell me if i messed up on:

Misspelledwords/Capitalization/Punctuation/Commas/Quotations, ect

(things i should add/fix) = Transitions, Sentence Variety, Weak Verbs, Repetitiveness, Modifiers (misplaced & dangling)


I'll put the essay in the comments. (Please don't steal.)

Answer 1

Here is the essay:

Answer 2

Anyone??

Answer 3

:(

Answer 4

it's good

Answer 5

So there's nothing wrong with it? I'm surprised, although my teacher said i have to list at least 3 things i fixed..

Answer 6

Any suggestions?

Answer 7

choose between "any and all" it may be too wordy.

Answer 8

its amazing no changes needed at all

Answer 9

waiver* not waver.

Answer 10

it's mostly spelling mistakes.

Answer 11

just spell check it

Answer 12

try grammarly, it's helped me get a good grade on my essays and stuff like that.

Answer 13

but it wont fix ALL of your mistakes, you'd have to pay to get the whole thing.

Answer 14

@Shadow if you have any spare time

Answer 15

Ah, thank you all! :)