Question

Just a lonely heart,
left in the dark.
Tries not to cry over all those little things,
Still trying to fly, with these broken wings.
They say family's always there,
Now im tryna count the people who care.
10,5,7,3. order of how much left me.
Now im wondering, why is life hittin so hard,
or is it just me playing the "depressed" card?
You ask how I been, I say im doin fine,
But did you know, that's always been a lie?
Writing doesn't make me feel better,
It just forms all my words in a letter.
"it'll get better" You say those words like it'll mean something,
but really, right now they mean nothing.
I want someone who will stay in my life,
someone who wont run away after a fight.
I get down on my knees and pray, that I wont have to live another day.
Only god really knows, How this life is supposed to go.

* Don't give up yet...it's just the beginning, you're being tested to see how strong you really are, its gods plan, hmu if you ever need support!<3*
(sorry i put it in music, rn its a poem, im thinking about making it a song ig)

Answer 1

this is good i think u should make it a song

Answer 2

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Munkman450
this is good i think u should make it a song
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Thank you! I'll see (:

Answer 3

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @LayhIsHere
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Munkman450
this is good i think u should make it a song
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Thank you! I'll see (:
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np

Answer 4

woah o-o, had me in tears, you should make that a song. That was really beautiful like for real. Definite 100/100. I feel you C:

Answer 5

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Joe348
woah o-o, had me in tears, you should make that a song. That was really beautiful like for real. Definite 100/100. I feel you C:
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awwwee, thank you!! Ill try c:

Answer 6

OMG this was such a moving poem I was crying before I got to the end. Great Poem Very Nice Job.

Answer 7

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @DayunginTasha
OMG this was such a moving poem I was crying before I got to the end. Great Poem Very Nice Job.
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awww<3 . tytyty!

Answer 8

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @LayhIsHere
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @DayunginTasha
OMG this was such a moving poem I was crying before I got to the end. Great Poem Very Nice Job.
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awww<3 . tytyty!
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anytime i love making other's happy cause it makes me happy.

Answer 9

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @DayunginTasha
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @LayhIsHere
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @DayunginTasha
OMG this was such a moving poem I was crying before I got to the end. Great Poem Very Nice Job.
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awww<3 . tytyty!
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anytime i love making other's happy cause it makes me happy.
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same- ish

Answer 10

>:D

Answer 11

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @LayhIsHere
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Joe348
woah o-o, had me in tears, you should make that a song. That was really beautiful like for real. Definite 100/100. I feel you C:
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awwwee, thank you!! Ill try c:
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good luck c:

Answer 12

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Joe348
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @LayhIsHere
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Joe348
woah o-o, had me in tears, you should make that a song. That was really beautiful like for real. Definite 100/100. I feel you C:
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
awwwee, thank you!! Ill try c:
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good luck c:
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tytyty c:

Answer 13

niceeee

Answer 14

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @neveahisthebest
niceeee
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thank youuuuuuu

Answer 15

np

Answer 16

*claps* Where is the golden trophy, anyone wanna give it to this awesome poem?

Answer 17

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Shuki
*claps* Where is the golden trophy, anyone wanna give it to this awesome poem?
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tehehee- Thank you! >3

Answer 18

ill give it if i know how

Answer 19

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @neveahisthebest
ill give it if i know how
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lol ty

Answer 20

yw

Answer 21

wow..this is so good i love it

Answer 22

WOWWWWW I LOVE IT SOOOO MUCHH, IT REALLY TOCHED MY HEART!! Keep up th goood work:)

Answer 23

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @zunairah
wow..this is so good i love it
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thank you!

Answer 24

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Alyzarose
WOWWWWW I LOVE IT SOOOO MUCHH, IT REALLY TOCHED MY HEART!! Keep up th goood work:)
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thank you! Thank you!

Answer 25

nice!!

Answer 26

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1
nice!!
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thank you, thank you

Answer 27

awe this is sad 🥺 if u ever needa talk im here for u just dm me <3 :)

Answer 28

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @miyadauglyrat
awe this is sad 🥺 if u ever needa talk im here for u just dm me <3 :)
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i write from the heart, and indeed

Answer 29

its good tho btw :)

Answer 30

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @miyadauglyrat
its good tho btw :)
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thank you, thank you.