Question

hey so im working on a song and i dont have a name/title for the song but here are the lyrics, i only have 1 verse and a chorus and a bridge so far so im not done yet. please feel free to give pointers and suggestion, id really appreciate it thank you:) also I dedicate this song to @UoU


(1st verse):
Were 2 thousand miles apart, I wish could see you, i wanna be with you
I knew I loved you from the start, You took my breathe away,
And I Don't know what to say other than,

(Chorus):
Roses are red, violets are blue, baby I just can't wait to meet you,
Can't wait to be standing at the altar sayin I do,
Roses are red, Violets are blue, baby I just can't help loving you,
You make light up, brighter than the moon, all i want from you is to want me too

(Brigde- I think):
I will always love you, no matter what i love you,
Whatever it takes or if my heart breaks I still will always love you
Whatever decision you make, whatever road you take,
I will be right there right next to you, if you want me to

Answer 1

far apart?

Answer 2

its good u honestly speaking out ur true love u got

Answer 3

That's an interesting song

Answer 4

roses 2 love?

Answer 5

u should make ur first verse longer so dat it builds up to the khorus

Answer 6

songs that are short are good tbh so u do wtv

Answer 7

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @joc2slump
its good u honestly speaking out ur true love u got
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mhmm thank you:)

Answer 8

wow wernt you just with Theboss5?

Answer 9

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @boredfr
That's an interesting song
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loll is that a good or bad thing xd

Answer 10

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @DADDY1234
wow wernt you just with Theboss5?
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looooooooooooooool

Answer 11

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Tyrion
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @DADDY1234
wow wernt you just with Theboss5?
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looooooooooooooool
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ewwww noooo yeck noo

Answer 12

thats so goooooooood

Answer 13

we talking bout the lyrics no other things(:

Answer 14

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @xxxnessalulbaddiexxx
thats so goooooooood
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thank youuu:)

Answer 15

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @joc2slump
we talking bout the lyrics no other things(:
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yes thank youuu:)

Answer 16

he said you called him your "dreem boy"

Answer 17

dream*

Answer 18

u still here leave its not about dhat.

Answer 19

jus saying....not trying to start any drama

Answer 20

even tho all yall are thirsty for drama

Answer 21

who says we are?

Answer 22

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Alyzarose
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @boredfr
That's an interesting song
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loll is that a good or bad thing xd
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Lmao I don't wanna say it is bad but I mean it looks like true love

Answer 23

Yeah you and that girl would be cute together

Answer 24

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @boredfr
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Alyzarose
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @boredfr
That's an interesting song
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loll is that a good or bad thing xd
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Lmao I don't wanna say it is bad but I mean it looks like true love
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ohh loll okayy thx:)

Answer 25

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @DADDY1234
Yeah you and that girl would be cute together
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Answer 26

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @DADDY1234
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @DADDY1234
Yeah you and that girl would be cute together
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why r u still here dude, loll if u dont have anything to say abt the lyrics then please jus leave thank you:)

Answer 27

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @DADDY1234
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Alyzarose
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @DADDY1234
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @DADDY1234
Yeah you and that girl would be cute together
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why r u still here dude, loll if u dont have anything to say abt the lyrics then please jus leave thank you:)
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ok here is something about the "song"...it suckes
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awwww omggg thank you, your so nice:)

Answer 28

I know:)

Answer 29

bro dhat aint nice for u to act like dis learn how to respect

Answer 30

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @joc2slump
bro dhat aint nice for u to act like dis learn how to respect
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yessss thank youuuuu:) :)

Answer 31

yw

Answer 32

may i ask how long have yall been together?

Answer 33

woahh this is good

Answer 34

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @zunairah
woahh this is good
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Thank Youu!!:)

Answer 35

I do?

Answer 36

It's sooo good alyza,ok i see u, go girl,i'm so proud of u🖤🖤

Answer 37

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @EmilyHerron
It's sooo good alyza,ok i see u, go girl,i'm so proud of u🖤🖤
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Thanks Bsf:) ily

Answer 38

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Alyzarose
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @EmilyHerron
It's sooo good alyza,ok i see u, go girl,i'm so proud of u🖤🖤
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Thanks Bsf:) ily
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ily2

Answer 39

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jakfishman
I do?
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huh? u do what lol

Answer 40

you said you need a name

Answer 41

ohh loll sorry im kinda slow XD but yea thx thats a good name

Answer 42

i usually try to get titles from chorus

Answer 43

yea same me too xd

Answer 44

i wanna hear it when you add the beat and vocals

Answer 45

yess fsfs:)

Answer 46

what would be the tempo?

Answer 47

hmmmm im not exactly sure yet tbh

Answer 48

also shouldn't there be an "i"

Answer 49

ohh loll yes there should be my bad

Answer 50

its good XD

Answer 51

lolll XD

Answer 52

is that the whole song? and bridge is correct

Answer 53

no its not the whole song i still have to write 1 or 2 more verses and polish up the lyrics

Answer 54

ok

Answer 55

Good, I like it.

Answer 56

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1
Good, I like it.
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Thanks:)

Answer 57

veres 2 should be what you love about him

Answer 58

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jakfishman
veres 2 should be what you love about him
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mhmm, yeaa thats what i was thinking to:)

Answer 59

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Alyzarose
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jakfishman
veres 2 should be what you love about him
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mhmm, yeaa thats what i was thinking to:)
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that would be good

Answer 60

great minds think alike Xd

Answer 61

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jakfishman
great minds think alike Xd
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lollll yasss XD

Answer 62

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @EmilyHerron
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Alyzarose
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jakfishman
veres 2 should be what you love about him
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mhmm, yeaa thats what i was thinking to:)
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that would be good
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yesss ikrrr xd

Answer 63

what instruments are you gonna use?

Answer 64

hmmm im not sure, idk if i want this to be a slow song or an upbeat song

Answer 65

what do u think

Answer 66

what you do is take a tempo sing the song with a slow tempo and a fast and witch one you like best

Answer 67

hmmm oki ill do that

Answer 68

i would say 100 fast slow 65

Answer 69

ok so i just used a metronome to help me find a tempo and i like 95 and 100

Answer 70

ok nice

Answer 71

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jakfishman
ok nice
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mhmm yass:)

Answer 72

@UoU

Answer 73

@Theboss5

Answer 74

@19002

Answer 75

@jc17