Question

Came up with a song/poem that regarded my feeling towards relationships. Tell me what you think.

Hey little girl dont be scared, hey little girl dont hide in fear
Come into my arms and you stay safe
Be a little patient and your fears will go away
How much longer are you gonna wait
You want to hear from him
But your dreams are far away
Just one more, one more lover
Then you can go astray
Finding another is harder than the others

Answer 1

i thought it was that other song "hey little girl" for a sec but great job

Answer 2

Sorry for the confusion, but thank you

Answer 3

Same Kylo.

Nice though!!!

Answer 4

I love it nice job keep up the good work!!!

Answer 5

Thanks all of you, honestly wondering if I could get some pointers?

Answer 6

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Shuki
Thanks all of you, honestly wondering if I could get some pointers?
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Answer 7

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Kylo
i thought it was that other song "hey little girl" for a sec but great job
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
same

Answer 8

but nice song :D

Answer 9

I like it! :D

Answer 10

NNice

Answer 11

i like it, sounds good

Answer 12

its good n keep it up

Answer 13

SOUNDS EPIC