Question

I need some help typing up my conclusion (check page 3) https://docs.google.com/document/d/1O6Gn82fG0WZI7WtxdRdWnESRL54CtRKCxSfVLb0mNC8/edit#heading=h.gter5esflv8o

Answer 1

This: "From the hardships foreigners faced to the awe-inspiring economical tools that helped shape our modern world, the industrial revolution in some way was like a roller coaster for our society, and it was just one of many others to come. In some ways, it brought us closer than ever, but in others, it tore millions apart, but it was a necessary choice to make in order to advance our ways of life." is the conclusion you already have?

Answer 2

Yes, but I am unsure if it is good enough

Answer 3

I am trying really hard to recover my grade and this essay is a HUGE portion of my grade

Answer 4

It is good, just needs more sentences.

Answer 5

Any ideas?

Answer 6

If I may... can I share a story I have to you?

Answer 7

sure

Answer 8

Actually, nevermind.

Use this reference to help you:
https://www.time4writing.com/writing-resources/writing-a-good-conclusion-paragraph/

Answer 9

Thanks

Answer 10

yw