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TETSXPREME:

help o;

TETSXPREME:

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isabel102:

hold on

isabel102:

its not A i know that

KingPizza:

@isabel102 wrote:
its not A i know that
yeah it's not A because the paragraph is already formal enough, so do you think it's B, C, or D? What are your thoughts here @tetsxpreme

KingPizza:

to help you out, I would suggest looking at the choices and seeing how well those things are included in the paragraph, and then see which one is significantly missing. So see, how much evidence is in there, does the paragraph need transitions, is the topic and purpose clear?...etc.

xxDeppressionxx:

@xxdeppressionxx wrote:
your right it is not (A.)

xxDeppressionxx:

@xxdeppressionxx wrote:
I think that the answer is (D.) but that is only because evidence supports a main idea which is the topic here.

TETSXPREME:

ah tysm

xxDeppressionxx:

Np

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