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Kyky232:

You're ugly if you don’t fit them. If you fit them you're treated like an object. If you try to fit them you're considered plastic and fake. Like a toy trying not to break. We stand here and take the abuse When we don’t suck it up we have a "screw loose" If we start to cry and mess up our perfect face, That’s when the story starts to take place. Ninety-seven percent. When will it end? She turns away with her keys between her fingers, Trying to avoid the terror that lingers. Men surrounding like sharks to blood. When all she wants is to be treated with love. Sexual harassment, We are teaching the daughters to never walk alone. But no one teaches the son to not be so hormone prone. We are not sharks. WE can live together without the fear. Stop enclosing our daughters, Start teaching the sons. (any criticism?? i wrote this for class lol)

RomMosher:

Nice

Alexis1415:

WOW i loveee itttt <3

RomMosher:

Every reply will be nice i swear

nettym:

nice :) well written.. good jobb

itsyogurl508:

@rommosher wrote:
Every reply will be nice i swear
oop

RomMosher:

@itsyogurl508 wrote:
@rommosher wrote:
Every reply will be nice i swear
oop
And was I right?

Joe348:

woah that hit different ngl o-o

Kyky232:

@joe348 wrote:
woah that hit different ngl o-o
thank you qwq

Joe348:

@kyky232 wrote:
@joe348 wrote:
woah that hit different ngl o-o
thank you qwq
ofc ky c:

AddyM:

nice!

demonlover3:

cool

xxDeppressionxx:

Nice kyky!

Alexis1415:

tehehe c:

sxdsouls:

ik im ugly

Alexis1415:

souls ur hot

sxdsouls:

;)

Alexis1415:

@sxdsouls wrote:
;)
heheheheh ;)

SaltTheLoser:

owoah

RomMosher:

@alexis1415 wrote:
@sxdsouls wrote:
;)
heheheheh ;)
Stop it get some help.

SaltTheLoser:

take all the boys to a vet and snip snip

Kyky232:

@salttheloser wrote:
take all the boys to a vet and snip snip
uhm chile anyway so-

Alexis1415:

oop lmao c:

CurtisGilstrap:

that's great, beautiful metaphors and an even more beautiful message, everything that makes a spectacular poem.

Kyky232:

@curtisgilstrap wrote:
that's great, beautiful metaphors and an even more beautiful message, everything that makes a spectacular poem.
thank you so much that means a lot <3

Alexis1415:

YODAAAAAAAA AAHHHHHHHH

SaltTheLoser:

i called myself ugly

Astrid1:

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG I'm dying, It'S SO GOODD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

CurtisGilstrap:

@kyky232 wrote:
@curtisgilstrap wrote:
that's great, beautiful metaphors and an even more beautiful message, everything that makes a spectacular poem.
thank you so much that means a lot <3
your welcome!

Kyky232:

@astrid1 wrote:
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG I'm dying, It'S SO GOODD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thanks astrid <3

itsmehjay:

Wow, very nice c:

itsyogurl508:

@rommosher wrote:
@itsyogurl508 wrote:
@rommosher wrote:
Every reply will be nice i swear
oop
And was I right?
yep

Inbox:

I'm not a girl but I like the way you put the I don't like seeing other boys treating girls like play toys it makes me sick that they have no respect to them,how do people live like that?

Kyky232:

@inbox wrote:
I'm not a girl but I like the way you put the I don't like seeing other boys treating girls like play toys it makes me sick that they have no respect to them,how do people live like that?
You're one of the males/ enby's i respect. Its absolutely sick.

Inbox:

im a male

vybez:

dang this is good asl, I love it. its so good to see someone caring about this kinda stuff<3

vybez:

@salttheloser wrote:
i called myself ugly
you're not ugly

Inbox:

like how do people live like that...its not right to treat girls like that I would never treat a girl like that cuz it is sick and it makes me feel bad when I see it happen cuz I just want to go over there and stop it

Inbox:

@alexis1415

Inbox:

I could talk all day about this it just makes me so mad how boys can do that and you know some people think everyone is like that but not all boys are like that most of them have good hearts like me

tayjah:

I like it, it shows a lot of things people dnt see in da world

Inbox:

whats really sick is when some girls want to be treated like that...it is unholy and agent my religion

Holly:

I call myself ugly because no one else sees me for my personality and I have gotten hurt by many guys and bullied by them. I have been called pig, fat, stupid, worthless, I don’t deserve love etc. The pain never goes away, for me being bullied all my life you start seeing yourself as they way other people do. From all this pain I get anxiety opening up to people and scared if I am going to get hurt again.

tayjah:

@holly wrote:
I call myself ugly because no one else sees me for my personality and I have gotten hurt by many guys and bullied by them. I have been called pig, fat, stupid, worthless, I don’t deserve love etc. The pain never goes away, for me being bullied all my life you start seeing yourself as they way other people do. From all this pain I get anxiety opening up to people and scared if I am going to get hurt again.
same buhh i get bullied for ma height

Holly:

@tayjah I get bullied for my body and not being a "skinny girl"

tayjah:

@holly wrote:
@tayjah I get bullied for my body and not being a "skinny girl"
ik sb who get bullied cs of dat same thing

Holly:

@tayjah but i want a guy who loves me for me, and is not ashamed to be my bf, I am not desperate, but it would be amazing to experience that for once

Holly:

@tayjah but i want a guy who loves me for me, and is not ashamed to be my bf, I am not desperate, but it would be amazing to experience that for once

Inbox:

@holly wrote:
I call myself ugly because no one else sees me for my personality and I have gotten hurt by many guys and bullied by them. I have been called pig, fat, stupid, worthless, I don’t deserve love etc. The pain never goes away, for me being bullied all my life you start seeing yourself as they way other people do. From all this pain I get anxiety opening up to people and scared if I am going to get hurt again.
other than not being a girl i can relate i have a thing called Aspergers its a type of autism and when people here about it that don't even go and look it up first they just start making fun of me and now I feel I cant fit in anywhere cuz they don't know what I go through that just think its funny and it not funny I didn't choose to be autistic i was born that way and if they got a prob well that's on them cuz I see me for who I really am a normal 16 year old boy cuz having autism is the only normal i know

Buenos88:

@inbox wrote:
@holly wrote:
I call myself ugly because no one else sees me for my personality and I have gotten hurt by many guys and bullied by them. I have been called pig, fat, stupid, worthless, I don’t deserve love etc. The pain never goes away, for me being bullied all my life you start seeing yourself as they way other people do. From all this pain I get anxiety opening up to people and scared if I am going to get hurt again.
other than not being a girl i can relate i have a thing called Aspergers its a type of autism and when people here about it that don't even go and look it up first they just start making fun of me and now I feel I cant fit in anywhere cuz they don't know what I go through that just think its funny and it not funny I didn't choose to be autistic i was born that way and if they got a prob well that's on them cuz I see me for who I really am a normal 16 year old boy cuz having autism is the only normal i know
Im sorry no one should be treated that way.

Buenos88:

Very deep

hamidiso23:

fire my g

hamidiso23:

@alexis1415 wrote:
souls ur hot
t h

Tawnie:

it's amazing i love it😍

maryyyy:

dang

SweetKai:

It's amazing, I love how the poem is talking about a serious subject. I agree with it

annabeth:

wow

CripQUEZZ:

Yo lil bro speakin facts 💯 thats fye mane good job

Monicasayshi:

I love it. it's amazing!!

rocfp:

NIce.

smurkio:

this gives me feminist vibes

CripQUEZZ:

@holly wrote:
I call myself ugly because no one else sees me for my personality and I have gotten hurt by many guys and bullied by them. I have been called pig, fat, stupid, worthless, I don’t deserve love etc. The pain never goes away, for me being bullied all my life you start seeing yourself as they way other people do. From all this pain I get anxiety opening up to people and scared if I am going to get hurt again.
Girl don’t put that on ya self you’re beautiful in and out you don’t need to listen to other peoples opinion to see that either you listen to what you need to hear not what others want you to hear you be the strong woman you are and don’t let others bring you down bc you’re different everyone is different but that’s the good thing abt us we all have a different appearance and we all have our own opinions but even tho ppl have opinions doesn’t mean that they are true you’re amazing in your own way and I want you to kno that

Leilani0324:

Woah I felt dat mane good job all facts no cappp

smurkio:

bruh

smurkio:

its not "all facts"

Laylalyssa:

@rommosher wrote:
Every reply will be nice i swear
wrong.

smurkio:

i have a problem with this its bothering me

Leilani0324:

Then don’t comment on it

CripQUEZZ:

@cripquezz wrote:
@holly wrote:
I call myself ugly because no one else sees me for my personality and I have gotten hurt by many guys and bullied by them. I have been called pig, fat, stupid, worthless, I don’t deserve love etc. The pain never goes away, for me being bullied all my life you start seeing yourself as they way other people do. From all this pain I get anxiety opening up to people and scared if I am going to get hurt again.
Girl don’t put that on ya self you’re beautiful in and out you don’t need to listen to other peoples opinion to see that either you listen to what you need to hear not what others want you to hear you be the strong woman you are and don’t let others bring you down bc you’re different everyone is different but that’s the good thing abt us we all have a different appearance and we all have our own opinions but even tho ppl have opinions doesn’t mean that they are true you’re amazing in your own way and I want you to kno that
@Holly

Monicasayshi:

@smurkio wrote:
this gives me feminist vibes
tf?

200082741:

Awesomee

SunnyLandscape04:

Tis a very true poem.

KazGotFetee:

sheeeeeeesh close dis post though couldn't even read all this holy issa long poem Cuzzo sacrificed his pencil for dis one

Kyky232:

@smurkio wrote:
this gives me feminist vibes
Quite frankly i am a feminist because i believe that women should be able to live without being harassed :)

smurkio:

@kyky232 wrote:
@smurkio wrote:
this gives me feminist vibes
Quite frankly i am a feminist because i believe that women should be able to live without being harassed :)
everyone is harrassed tho

Kyky232:

@smurkio wrote:
@kyky232 wrote:
@smurkio wrote:
this gives me feminist vibes
Quite frankly i am a feminist because i believe that women should be able to live without being harassed :)
everyone is harrassed tho
but its more common in women

smurkio:

@kyky232 wrote:
@smurkio wrote:
@kyky232 wrote:
@smurkio wrote:
this gives me feminist vibes
Quite frankly i am a feminist because i believe that women should be able to live without being harassed :)
everyone is harrassed tho
but its more common in women
but still

KingToastyMike:

thats gorgeous <3

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