Question

This is the beginning of my book called, Singularity.


There was a time where there were no humans. No life. No planets. Just one star. One star, called Singularity. Our star exploded, birthing our solar system, and the planet we live on called Earth. The planet we get our most important nutrients from that is called the Sun. Our most mysterious planet we are exploring called Mars and many others. All of this, thanks to one star. Singularity.


How would I improve this?

Answer 1

It is really good so far, honestly, I like it. It's the same way I would start a book, so I don't see reason for improving much at all. But if you want something to add to make it "better", then I would say you should try to add something that the character(s) think about the sun as their creator/surival depot.

Answer 2

Our most mysterious planet(s) we are exploring is called Mars and (The Moon) (not many others)

I hope this is what you were asking for,

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Answer 3

I really like it :> It reminds of a Genesis ( a bible story ) when everything was created :> Keep up the work.!

Answer 4

thx