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Uhh how does this sound? First i want to say, I wrote this because I'm going through a tough time and had to get rid of sum emotion, yk yk? Anyways- It's below e.e VV


I guess when you're lonely that's just how life goes.
You absorb pain and nobody knows.
They care until you hide your scars behind your hair.
Yeah well Ig they dared.

Yeh yeh.
I'm sick of trying
Everybody's crying
They expect the best of me.
When I can't find the rest of me.

I don't rlly see the point in living.
When Ion even make a difference
Breaking every heart
Just to restart.
Now I'm crying in your car.

Yeah
This the last time. You find out
Bc I'm going down a different route.
Ion expect much from you.
When you broke my heart in two.

Didn't believe me when I said I care about you.
Huh, well, Ig now that's true.

Didn't say you loved me.
Yeah well now you sit above me.

You better expect the worst from me.
Because Now I am free.

Answer 1

sounds scrumptious

Answer 2

Lmao, thx.

Answer 3

I love it....

Answer 4

sad but good poem

Answer 5

<3 hope you feel better

Answer 6

it's actually a rap-

Answer 7

mood and good :)

Answer 8

R&B?

Answer 9

All I kept heaaring was NF's voice when I was writing this song- xd

Answer 10

i like itt,, astrid the rapper okok ill support it

Answer 11

It was very deep and true for many.

Answer 12

Lol.

Ty guyz e.e

I've gotta edit it a bit and add more lyrics. e.e

Answer 13

Now most songs are written in A B A B such as

My heart Is warm (a)
Just as my heart was when you broke me (b)
I feel as though there is a swarm (a)
Right beneath thee (b)

Btw i just made this up myself.......just to give you a visual

Answer 14

Your song is A A B B

Answer 15

This is amazing, well written, good jobb :)) @astrid1

Answer 16

that's really good. i felt it harrrdd. you should keep doing these : )

Answer 17

Yeah!

Thanks Guys!.

And Shawnte, even if my beat is different it still wont matter because the lyrics are the real meaning of a song, and the emotion you feel.

Answer 18

its trash

Answer 19

im not in it so trash

Answer 20

put salt in there and id say you would get some awards for it

Answer 21

Bruh this guy is always talking trash smh

Answer 22

In my opinion its pretty good.

Answer 23

This is quite the poem, very sad, but also strong.

Answer 24

owoah i was clearly joking

Answer 25

deg

Answer 26

@astrid1 Great job! I really felt this, if you ever need support hmu in dm's. Hopefully it all turns around for you.

Answer 27

astrid ur amazing! omg i luv it!

Answer 28

Thank's both of you. e.e

Answer 29

OMG THIS IS SO GOOD YOU'RE AWESOME T^T

Answer 30

its really nice, great job astrid

Answer 31

ty o;

Answer 32

@mylesnewman this is one of my works of art o;