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Rylee88:

Read this please *Full thing*

Rylee88:

Wrong thing XD

AlexSun:

lmao

Rylee88:

Why is it so quiet? Why can't I move? And why is it so dark? I try to recall where I am, but I cannot remember. Blackness surrounds me. I hear a familiar voice that makes my heart flutter like a thousand butterflies. It is the voice of my friend, Maddy. She visits her grandparents here on the Gulf of Mexico every summer. She usually brings me crumbs, but today, I cannot smell anything except the sour smell of oil. Her voice sounds worried, different from the usual cheerful greeting that she calls me with every day at dusk. I try to turn towards her, but I can't move very well. My feet feel mired as if in quicksand. I hear her come closer. Her words help me understand that something has happened to my home. "Oh, grandma! What is all this? They are all covered in it! It's black. Ugh! The smell is so strong I can't stand it." Maddy's tears stream down her face, mingling with mine. I hear her crying, but all is dark, like a moonless night. Where is the smiling sun? I try to stretch out to feel the warmth, but my wings do not respond.

XxXNessalulbaddieXxX:

this is nice

Rylee88:

Whats the Genre though?

RomMosher:

Nice

XxXNessalulbaddieXxX:

ahh hmmmm

EmilyHerron:

@rylee88 wrote:
Why is it so quiet? Why can't I move? And why is it so dark? I try to recall where I am, but I cannot remember. Blackness surrounds me. I hear a familiar voice that makes my heart flutter like a thousand butterflies. It is the voice of my friend, Maddy. She visits her grandparents here on the Gulf of Mexico every summer. She usually brings me crumbs, but today, I cannot smell anything except the sour smell of oil. Her voice sounds worried, different from the usual cheerful greeting that she calls me with every day at dusk. I try to turn towards her, but I can't move very well. My feet feel mired as if in quicksand. I hear her come closer. Her words help me understand that something has happened to my home. "Oh, grandma! What is all this? They are all covered in it! It's black. Ugh! The smell is so strong I can't stand it." Maddy's tears stream down her face, mingling with mine. I hear her crying, but all is dark, like a moonless night. Where is the smiling sun? I try to stretch out to feel the warmth, but my wings do not respond.
This is sooo good

Rylee88:

Thx but I did not write it lol I need to know the Genre

EmilyHerron:

@rylee88 wrote:
Thx but I did not write it lol I need to know the Genre
ahahaha i'm soo stupid lol

Rylee88:

Lol My Apologies

ItzAgar:

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ItzAgar:

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Rylee88:

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UhhhKhakis:

This is good!

Rylee88:

Thx But its not mine, I need to know the Genre

AlexSun:

I would say horror because in this story it gives us a feeling of dread and a little bit of terror.

Rylee88:

Okay, Thank you! I really Appreciate it!

UhhhKhakis:

This is horror and suspense.

Rylee88:

lol

AlexSun:

Yes I would agree 100% percent with you khakis

Rylee88:

=)

AlexSun:

;)

AlexSun:

well your welcome and have a good day.

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