Question

This is my poem called 'ourselves'.

You are the light of my life.
The apple of my eye.
The peanut butter to my jelly and bread.
The fish in my sea.

I can't be without you.
I can't be complete without you.
I can't live without you.
I can't love anyone but you.

I told you I love you.
You told me you loved me.
But did you mean it?
But did I mean it?

What do you do when i'm not there?
What do you say to her?
Where do you go when i'm not with you?
Where do you go with her?

Do you even love me?
Do I even love you?
Do we love each other?
Do we love ourselves?



What do you guys think?

Answer 1

ify

Answer 2

that is so sweet and I felt that way before

Answer 3

turn up

Answer 4

Like it

Answer 5

Thanks!

Answer 6

That´s really good keep it up!

Answer 7

Yes, i'm making it for a surprise project for my teacher.

Answer 8

I just wanted to see others opinions before I email it

Answer 9

It's amazing.

Answer 10

sounds like this song called Perfect Two

Answer 11

simp

Answer 12

Makes me wanna write again.

Answer 13

Very good and strong Poem

Answer 14

its funny how its so true
i love it c:

Answer 15

Nice.

Answer 16

thank you