i need some ideas for this song im trying to write about depression and about the struggles i went through

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XxXNessalulbaddieXxX · Answer

hmmmm mmm personal problems that u maybe have

kassidydaddysgurl · Answer

like im kinda stuck on what to add

YECR · Answer

damn man im sorry but how is this something that is related to school?

YECR · Answer

this a You Probelm

OsoBear · Answer

subject:music

kassidydaddysgurl · Answer

all i have so far is yo i  face my darkness hid away my pain face my dreams be the fake me

kassidydaddysgurl · Answer

idk it dumb but i got sum like that

YECR · Answer

Pain and heart broken

OsoBear · Answer

i wrote a poem bout my depression. ill send it on here n maybe you can get sum ideas lmaoo

kassidydaddysgurl · Answer

so should i add i  after  i face my dreams like i  idk??

Ashely · Answer

add the reason u are living

kassidydaddysgurl · Answer

but were into it

KiWiPoP1 · Answer

lol

YECR · Answer

@ashely wrote:

add the reason u are living

lol

kassidydaddysgurl · Answer

ight

KiWiPoP1 · Answer

this sounds overly edgey

kassidydaddysgurl · Answer

so i added  but got me bosting threw this sh  
ite

KiWiPoP1 · Answer

@kassidydaddysgurl wrote:

all i have so far is yo i face my darkness hid away my pain face my dreams be the fake me

wowie

smurkio · Answer

if u went through the struggle of depression why are you asking us?

KiWiPoP1 · Answer

exactly 🤔

KiWiPoP1 · Answer

We must've been depressed too 😁

YECR · Answer

My mind gone, I can't sleep
I ain't got no appetite, I can't even eat
It's kinda hard being me
My eyes closed, I can't see
My mind gone, I can't sleep

smurkio · Answer

smh

YECR · Answer

write sum like that but in your own wrds

Ashely · Answer

@yecr wrote:

My mind gone, I can't sleep I ain't got no appetite, I can't even eat It's kinda hard being me My eyes closed, I can't see My mind gone, I can't sleep

SHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESH

smurkio · Answer

🤔

kassidydaddysgurl · Answer

thx

KiWiPoP1 · Answer

I feel like if you're making a writing or whatever about depression, smh, use your own experiences

YECR · Answer

@ashely wrote:

@yecr wrote:

My mind gone, I can't sleep I ain't got no appetite, I can't even eat It's kinda hard being me My eyes closed, I can't see My mind gone, I can't sleep

SHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESH

what>?

Ashely · Answer

@yecr wrote:

@ashely wrote:

@yecr wrote:

My mind gone, I can't sleep I ain't got no appetite, I can't even eat It's kinda hard being me My eyes closed, I can't see My mind gone, I can't sleep

SHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESH

what>?

nun

YECR · Answer

@kiwipop1 wrote:

I feel like if you're making a writing or whatever about depression, smh, use your own experiences

exatcly

smurkio · Answer

@kiwipop1 wrote:

I feel like if you're making a writing or whatever about depression, smh, use your own experiences

fr

KiWiPoP1 · Answer

now all I'm getting are depressed gatcha vibes

smurkio · Answer

fake depression 🤔

KiWiPoP1 · Answer

🙂👍🏽

kassidydaddysgurl · Answer

im not fakeing it but okay

KiWiPoP1 · Answer

okie 😁

smurkio · Answer

u say that like u still have "depression"

smurkio · Answer

loololol

KiWiPoP1 · Answer

@smurkio wrote:

u say that like u still have "depression"

mhm mhm

KiWiPoP1 · Answer

lolzz

OsoBear · Answer

heres the poem i wrote bout my depression for a school assignment lmaoo. hopefully this can give you ideas

YECR · Answer

Right here, all by myself
I ain't got no one else
The situation is bleeding me
There's no relief for a person like me
If I held my breath in the morning
Would I wake up for a lifetime
Lose my job in this depression
Well I don't care cause I got your love

YECR · Answer

@osobear wrote:

heres the poem i wrote bout my depression for a school assignment lmaoo. hopefully this can give you ideas

Yh or this

OsoBear · Answer

huh?

kassidydaddysgurl · Answer

thx

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