Question

Think about a favorite memory of yours. Write 3 sentences for the beginning, middle and end.
Name: Christian Steele
Title: Moose Man Makes a Friend
Beginning(hook): When Moose Man comes round everyone makes a frown when the sun comes down he is sad. He is sad because all he wants is one thing. A friend and that’s all he wants.


Middle: One day Rapper John comes by and says “ayo moose wanna come down to my place and chill”. And Moose says “yea sure Rapper John how u wanna chill”. “Wanna watch a movie or play ball”.


End: Rapper John says” what ever u wanna do Moose Man itz yoo choice”. And they both walk to Rapper Johns place while the sun goes down. Then Moose Man turns around and goes to get his ball and tells Rapper John “I wanna play ball”and laughs hahaha. do yall like my story

Answer 1

fix some grammar errors and you'll be great!!

Answer 2

ok

Answer 3

thx

Answer 4

It's alright, but there are quite a bit of grammatical errors.

Answer 5

no problem!!

Answer 6

oki astrid1

Answer 7

i like that you quoted and did that great just as said above fix the errors and you should be good

Answer 8

thx

Answer 9

It's good. I would put it through grammarly though just to be sure :)