Question

so i said i felt like writing a poem.. here it is


pluviophile

wake up, the sound of thunder
The momentum as you rise to sit up
The rhythm of countless raindrops hitting the ground
you would do anything to hear that sound
you step out into the world, deep breath
in and out, the fresh smell of rain
the movement of crisp wind on your skin
you feel one with the planet
at peace.

lmk what u guys think : )

Answer 1

its ok

Answer 2

more like a description of a book