Hey guys i made a song and i got half of it's done and seeing if what u guys think? and if you got any ideas or more lyrics? the link will be down below

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Hey guys i made a song and i got half of it's done and seeing if what u guys think?  and if you got any ideas or more lyrics? the link will be down below

EmilyHerron · Answer

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AnimeDude1738 · Answer

great song

EmilyHerron · Answer

@animedude1738 wrote:

great song

thank you!

SelenaMcCann · Answer

I love it!!

EmilyHerron · Answer

@selenamccann wrote:

I love it!!

Awwww thank u

nettym · Answer

nice :)

EmilyHerron · Answer

@nettym wrote:

nice :)

thx's

Axton · Answer

@emilyherron wrote:

@nettym wrote:

nice :)

thx's

ehhh its ok the lyrics are too va va voomish they could use a twirk to em but other than that theyre pretty good.

EmilyHerron · Answer

@axton wrote:

@emilyherron wrote:

@nettym wrote:

nice :)

thx's

ehhh its ok the lyrics are too va va voomish they could use a twirk to em but other than that theyre pretty good.

ok thx's for the advice

nettym · Answer

I would also mess around with word choices a bit :) but best of luck

Axton · Answer

@emilyherron wrote:

@axton wrote:

@emilyherron wrote:

@nettym wrote:

nice :)

thx's

ehhh its ok the lyrics are too va va voomish they could use a twirk to em but other than that theyre pretty good.

ok thx's for the advice

no problem have a nice day

EmilyHerron · Answer

@axton wrote:

@emilyherron wrote:

@axton wrote:

@emilyherron wrote:

@nettym wrote:

nice :)

thx's

ehhh its ok the lyrics are too va va voomish they could use a twirk to em but other than that theyre pretty good.

ok thx's for the advice

no problem have a nice day

you too

EmilyHerron · Answer

@nettym wrote:

I would also mess around with word choices a bit :) but best of luck

ok thx's

Astrid1 · Answer

It's quite nice.

As for what Netty said, I couldn't agree more. Mess around with the words a bit and it'll sound great. (Not saying it's bad or anything) But, best of luck!

Tallyho.

EmilyHerron · Answer

@astrid1 wrote:

It's quite nice. As for what Netty said, I couldn't agree more. Mess around with the words a bit and it'll sound great. (Not saying it's bad or anything) But, best of luck! Tallyho.

ok thank you so much

BankrolHayden · Answer

really good

EmilyHerron · Answer

@bankrolhayden wrote:

really good

thx's

Antoniothegoat · Answer

nice song

BankrolHayden · Answer

np

EmilyHerron · Answer

@antoniothegoat wrote:

nice song

thank you

REDViper · Answer

Wonderful song

EmilyHerron · Answer

@redviper wrote:

Wonderful song

awwww thank you

REDViper · Answer

np

bemine11 · Answer

its really good

EmilyHerron · Answer

@bemine11 wrote:

its really good

thank u so much

VRT123456789 · Answer

it is realy good could use a few different words

Alyzarose · Answer

this is so fireee bsf good job keep up the good workkkkkk!!!!:)

EmilyHerron · Answer

@vrt123456789 wrote:

it is realy good could use a few different words

ok thanks

EmilyHerron · Answer

@alyzarose wrote:

this is so fireee bsf good job keep up the good workkkkkk!!!!:)

awwwwww thx's bestieeee

Alyzarose · Answer

@emilyherron wrote:

@alyzarose wrote:

this is so fireee bsf good job keep up the good workkkkkk!!!!:)

awwwwww thx's bestieeee

ywwwwwwww:)

EmilyHerron · Answer

@alyzarose wrote:

@emilyherron wrote:

@alyzarose wrote:

this is so fireee bsf good job keep up the good workkkkkk!!!!:)

awwwwww thx's bestieeee

ywwwwwwww:)

🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤

Axton · Answer

breh?!?

EmilyHerron · Answer

@axton wrote:

breh?!?

yessss?

Axton · Answer

oh huh idk.

EmilyHerron · Answer

@axton wrote:

oh huh idk.

anything wrong??

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