Hey is this poem good. It's for my English class.

Scars are like clothes
Like dirty clothes
Pilling up around your room
They don’t go
It’s like a bomb went boom
But when you finally wash them
And put them away
The stink will stay
Even though the cuts heal
You’ll still have scars
They are just as real
Covering up the smell with Febreeze
Or pulling down your sleeves
It doesn’t change peoples stare
It doesn’t change that they are still there

Question

Hey is this poem good. It's for my English class.

Scars are like clothes
Like dirty clothes
Pilling up around your room
They don’t go
It’s like a bomb went boom
But when you finally wash them
And put them away
The stink will stay
Even though the cuts heal
You’ll still have scars
They are just as real
Covering up the smell with Febreeze
Or pulling down your sleeves
It doesn’t change peoples stare
It doesn’t change that they are still there

Shawnte · Answer

ahhhhhh no cap u should make that a song

person321 · Answer

oh wow thank you

Shawnte · Answer

yea i make songs........maybe you could hmu one day

itsmehjay · Answer

Ok I have to admit I like this a lot, pretty good

person321 · Answer

oh... uh probably not but thx

smurkio · Answer

"They are just as real
Covering up the smell with Febreeze" i like that

miguelxsimps · Answer

Cool :)

Lxre · Answer

dope good job :creepysmile:

person321 · Answer

ok thx guys i just wanted to check