Question

Okay I need some feedback on this song I had to write for school :(


Love is so stressful….
And I'm caught up in the middle of it all
And it takes control
Of the life I wish I could’ve lived
The girl I used to know
But there’s a voice in my head and it drives me insane From my head crushed into my heart
…...more
It stays and moves like rain
I hate when it does(2x times)
We watch as our young hearts fade
Like drugs, oh like drugs
My love’s failing
A thought to be so-oh-oh wrong…
It slips though my mind
Trying so hard to let go
I hate when I feel this way
I hate when I get this way
Carried me away

Answer 1

This hits deep ;-;

Answer 2

It's very good Joe.

Answer 3

^ it's really good though

Answer 4

Ty ty <3

Answer 5

Np (:

Answer 6

Np (:

Answer 7

it's very good job it hit hard

Answer 8

Niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.

Hit's hard tho T^T

Answer 9

TY TY :)

Answer 10

smackz harder then my ma unblock me. cutie

Answer 11

No thank you c:

Answer 12

this slaps👋🏽

Answer 13

😂its very good lol

Answer 14

Thank you lyssie <3

Answer 15

np ❤

Answer 16

This is good Joe!! Cant wait to hear it ;)

Answer 17

Oof Ion bout that know XD

Answer 18

Lol

Answer 19

I like it. It's interesting.

Answer 20

What is the Sub-Topic? (Genre)

Answer 21

Um music but I need feedback on what I shouldve add or anything like that but I have to match it to the song
Waves by Dean Lewis
And thank you dude

Answer 22

dang joe...deep

Answer 23

ty ty queen <33

Answer 24

ofc ofc king <3

Answer 25

damn r u heart broke

Answer 26

bc yo song make it seem like it

Answer 27

Very Very Good

Answer 28

but i was good

Answer 29

its very deep....but that shi smacks....Sheeeeeeeeeesh

Answer 30

ty ty and if i was heart broken it would be about depression c:

Answer 31

I see

Answer 32

indeed joey

Answer 33

now I want to see a song about depression from u joe 0-0

Answer 34

i-

Answer 35

;-; sorry

Answer 36

oop-

Answer 37

my heart is broke like sheeeeeeeeeesh

Answer 38

LMAO roxy... u wanna see him to write that

Answer 39

yes...

Answer 40

i- am speechless

Answer 41

h-how? I just want to see a song about depression...

Answer 42

No ones hearts are healed tf sheeeesh

Answer 43

the great depression LMAO ;)

Answer 44

like sheeeeeeeesh.......if yo heart broken go break something

Answer 45

was Joe joking with me? I hope he was.

Answer 46

about what? depression

Answer 47

he said I broke his heart

Answer 48

oooop i have no idea

Answer 49

;-; oh well...

Answer 50

It hit very deep. And I loved it Joe.

Answer 51

aww ty c:

Answer 52

yw

Answer 53

did you record it yet joe? or just write it

Answer 54

nope