Question

I wrote this awhile ago and I thought I'd share it with y'all.

Love is an illusion.
It's something we feel.
We cannot change it.
Nor can we heal.
Every piece of our heart break's into a bit.

I hope love never dies.
From all the boys and girl's that cry.
We're all facing pain.
It's unbearable in the rain.

Love is an illusion
It is fake.
Our whole lives are at stake.
And we're the one's to blame.

I hope the world get's better
For forever.
Love is bitter.
We shan't consider it worthy.
It is at it's worst.

This poem doesn't mean we are the reason we get heartbroken it mean's we're too desperate to have a status that we don't pay attention to how bad we're hurting somebody. We all need to change, it doesn't mean we have to be the perfect lover but it mean's we need to work harder.

Love isn't an illusion, it's just a drug.
We get addicted to it and we can't get out of it unless one get's hurt... c:

Answer 1

Great poem, great everything, good job

Answer 2

Even if one gets hurt there's always a different solution.

And Thank you (:

Answer 3

nice work! have you ever considered writing songs?

Answer 4

Thank you.

I do actually write songs c:

Answer 5

ouu nice

Answer 6

ohhh wow thats great

Answer 7

Thank you c:

Answer 8

great! good work :)

Answer 9

Thank you (:

Answer 10

Omgg aweosmee

Answer 11

Tank you (:

Answer 12

np :) have a good day!

Answer 13

nice job! It's really good👌

Answer 14

(: You too!

Thanks zbz c:

Answer 15

I didn't write this when we we're together.. I actually wrote this when me and QCB broke up.

But yea <.<

Answer 16

awesome poem

Answer 17

Its Amazing nice work

Answer 18

This is a nice poem :0 I love it!!

Answer 19

but i love you astrid

Answer 20

and that aint no illusion

Answer 21

coool

Answer 22

damn that was good

Answer 23

Really great poem!!

Answer 24

Tank you <3 <3

Answer 25

damn astrid this is extremely well written ;-;

Answer 26

good job

Answer 27

Tank you c:

Answer 28

good job its rlly good

Answer 29

it’s very beautiful written ilt astrid 💙🤙

Answer 30

Tank chu.

Answer 31

Very, nice.. I could visualize it.
Hehe it's brilliant!

Answer 32

Thank you c:

Answer 33

One thing to add though.

When we're heartbroken or get/got broken we're letting somebody do it to us. We need to show them the route that'll help both of us, not just one. and if the bumps get heavy you take it slow along the road. You need to share ideas and emotions with each other. Feel comfortable with saying anything to them. Because if you're not honest with them you're partially the reason you'll get broken.

Telling them the truth will help them more than anything. Being there for them. Not cheating on them because you have the chance to. Because you deserve to be loved by them as much as they deserve to be loved by you. Being respectful in a relationship will go very far.

Picture this when you see them.
Pick a color (any color) and imagine them in that color of a t-shirt that says VALUE ME. Everything that they say to you should matter. Everything you say to them should matter. Continue along that route and you'll make it far <3 <3

Answer 34

this is really nice- very understandable.

Answer 35

Yea.

Answer 36

good job

Answer 37

aww its cute astrid i like it and its deep and meaningful, good job

Answer 38

noice

Answer 39

i love it

Answer 40

I LOVE IT. U should wright more!

Answer 41

Ouuu,i love the poem✋🏻🙃⭐️

Answer 42

She makes me cry... a lot... because of the way she works...but I love her so much for it-

Answer 43

Aww don't cwy c:

Answer 44

💖THats so cute

Answer 45

Great work.