Question

Uhm... come read my story, I'm gonna post it below.

Answer 1

Circus- Lindsay Mendez
“Hello, kind sir,”
The young woman smiled, locking her hand on the table with a small smile.
“I'm so glad, you never met me!”
He looked up at her confused, tilting his head and inquiring.
“Whatever do you mean, Miss?”
She strung a hand through soft blonde locks, her dark skin glowing against the yellow light of the oil lamp. Slowly, she stood, picking up a wrench from the table, which she dragged it along on. Leaving scratches and dents in her wake, she bent down coming to eye level with the man.
“You’re my first one,” Her smile turned rotten, eyes glistening in the dark. “So forgive me if it's messy.”
“Wh-what..?”
“Just to be fair..”
She secured herself on his lap, looking down at him, his head level with the bosom of her dress. He looked up at her confused and flustered. Slowly she brought his hands to rest on her hips and smiled bashfully.
“I admit, that I'm scared.”
He sighed and smiled.
“You don’t have to be..”
“And sorry..”
He looked up at her, confused. Her face was unreadable, a flat emotionless tone drifted with her voice.
“For what I must do..”
BANG!
“NO! NO STOP!”
“Best not to talk! Cause you’ll kill the mood around you!~”
“GET OFF YOU WENCH!”
She wrestled him onto the floor, huffing. Breathing heavily she glared down at him, not understanding why he just wouldn't let her win. He continued to struggle against her, beginning to cry.
“Just close your eyes, and be lucky I found you!”
She slowly pressed a hand to his mouth, cutting off his oxygen.
“No one will know... Okay? Here goes!”
She pressed her second hand to his trachea.
“It's as easy as one… two… three!”
She giggled gleefully as the sickening crack burst through the muffled chaos of the room, and the man beneath her stopped talking, stopped moving. Gasping unable to breathe he slowly suffocated to death.
“Wh-What..?”
The young woman looked up to find an older woman and smirked. Her eyes glistened darkly, and the older woman stepped back. “J-Jared!! H-Help!!”
The older woman ran, and the young assassin stood up ad bolted after her.
“Good afternoon, Miss, you are my second victim!”
She cheered as the woman, kept running. Slowly She picked up her speed before pinning the woman down, slowly whispering in his ear.
“First one was trouble... Not to worry, cus I fixed ‘im!”
She pulled the woman against her, chuckling lowly into her ear.
“Shh… not a word, cus you won't be heard..”
The woman was gasping, begging to be let go, she squirmed under the assassin’s hands.
“When I have your life in my hands!”
“A-At least tell me wh-why! P-Please… I-I won't r-run…”
“...Just know, that what I am doing is part of a plan..”
“..e-explain..?”
The female assassin rolled her eyes.

Answer 2

uHM- Its not quite yet finished, but its based on the song Circus.

Answer 3

I LOVE IT
AND UR USERNAME <3 Great work mate

Answer 4

I like it good job

Answer 5

All my love too you <3

Answer 6

^-^

Answer 7

Nice!I love itt!

Answer 8

woah i wasnt expecting that, its very detailed and i think you did a good job. i was HELLA confused but maybe thats just me lol

Answer 9

Keep working on it I would love to read the complete story!!!

Answer 10

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Answer 11

yea you can dm it to me

Answer 12

Heheh

Answer 13

i loved it

Answer 14

Like this?

Answer 15

np its brilliant

Answer 16

Ah- I-Its relly now >///<

Answer 17

u ok

Answer 18

Nice, you've figured it out.

Answer 19

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XD_auaUqBYAqTdd15fxuQ717Y2ycasDGhsmJrezHZi8/edit#

Answer 20

spam?

Answer 21

it was really good i didnt even want to stop reading it but yk the story stopped so i had to loll

Answer 22

\(\color{lightblue}{Love it}\)

Answer 23

but great work :)

Answer 24

cOOL

Answer 25

It was interesting but maybe add more details and information. Or maybe use this to help you https://www.google.com/search?safe=active&surl=1&q=how+to+make+a+story&rlz=1C1GCEA_enUS918US918&oq=how+to+make+a+story&aqs=chrome..69i57j0l9.6414j0j7&sourceid=chrome&ie=UTF-8 but other than that I think it was interesting but needed more details

Answer 26

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 27

@IThinkThereforeIam MORE

Answer 28

YES MORE...

Answer 29

love it. amsing

Answer 30

Nice job :) really good

Answer 31

I like it, it's pretty good (:

Answer 32

I like it

Answer 33

Great job!