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Astrid1:

A short little poem I wrote while being bored bc qc was dead c: He built a world with two beautiful stars. He was the one who lifted cars He fixed situations when you were gone. He told you all your problems when you were wron’ He’s perfect on paper. But he needs to save her But he’s lying. And she’s always crying. Does he think they were meant to be? I don’t think they were and she just wants to be let free. But she’s built with two wall’s and love’s him to the end. She was just glad to have a friend. She couldn’t help but feel her world crumbling. As she saw their love tumbling. He stood forward with his heart in his heart, questioning his actions. He contemplated between mathematical fractions. His story live on just as much as his love for her. But her faith in his has plummeted and all she does is slur. She looks at the bottle wondering what she did wrong. She saw the star’s crash, so where is the song? She expected too much in return. Now her stomach seems to churn. We want the world to be perfect but we can’t hold our heart’s together. We see them fixin’ their world only to become better. We need to reunite what’s been broken so people can’t get hurt. The world doesn’t have to be perfect but we could at least flirt. We don’t need to be sad all the time. We’ve got a lot of people and they’ve got love to find.

Extrinix:

(This is not in any way shape or form related to our relationship, just saying.)

Extrinix:

I love it though, it's really good. c:

Astrid1:

Tank chu.

Extrinix:

Always, mi amor. <3

Astrid1:

(:

Astrid1:

Another one (: Two Bullets with no wound. Two stars without a moon. Two heart’s easy to bend. Two heart’s that’ll mend. Two songs with no end. Two people, what could happen?

GayboytopLeo:

nice

jhonyy9:

CONGRATS !!! these are NICEEE !!!!

Astrid1:

Ty c:

Joe348:

@astrid1 wrote:
Another one (: Two Bullets with no wound. Two stars without a moon. Two heart’s easy to bend. Two heart’s that’ll mend. Two songs with no end. Two people, what could happen?
a lot could happen you know... but anyway I love it and its really good asxtro cx

Astrid1:

(: ty

poptart:

Poptart agrees. Poptart says you should make more for Poptart.

bivibes:

@astrid1 wrote:
Another one (: Two Bullets with no wound. Two stars without a moon. Two heart’s easy to bend. Two heart’s that’ll mend. Two songs with no end. Two people, what could happen?
NICE JOB UR TALENTED

Astrid1:

Ty <3

bivibes:

np

Extrinix:

@bivibes wrote:
@astrid1 wrote:
Another one (: Two Bullets with no wound. Two stars without a moon. Two heart’s easy to bend. Two heart’s that’ll mend. Two songs with no end. Two people, what could happen?
NICE JOB UR TALENTED
Honestly though, she's amazing, in every way-.

bivibes:

. - .

bivibes:

yep

Astrid1:

Awww ur, even more, amazing in every way-

bivibes:

om

Astrid1:

xd

bivibes:

lol

julieta:

Its really good..i love it 😍

Astrid1:

Ty c:

julieta:

@astrid1 wrote:
Ty c:
No problem

bivibes:

astrid

LandonGoma:

beautiful luv its beautiful like you are!

bivibes:

@astrid1

Extrinix:

@landongoma wrote:
beautiful luv its beautiful like you are!
Absolutely agree c:

Astrid1:

Awww tank you 🤧💕💕💕💕

LandonGoma:

@extrinix wrote:
@landongoma wrote:
beautiful luv its beautiful like you are!
Absolutely agree c:
astrid is the best writter ive ever met.

LandonGoma:

@astrid1 wrote:
Awww tank you 🤧💕💕💕💕
your welcome luv

Extrinix:

Trueeee

bivibes:

ye i agree

Astrid1:

xd omg y'all are gonna make me cry xdd

Extrinix:

@astrid1 wrote:
xd omg y'all are gonna make me cry xdd
Aweee c: <3

LandonGoma:

she's actually the reason I started writting books and poems myself

Astrid1:

I am? o:

LandonGoma:

Yes you are

Extrinix:

Woah. .-.

Astrid1:

Aw I feel special 0:

LandonGoma:

you've helped me a lot and taught me so much In life that you actually changed who I was into someone better and I thank you for that.

bivibes:

@landongoma wrote:
you've helped me a lot and taught me so much In life that you actually changed who I was into someone better and I thank you for that.
Same <3 < 3

bivibes:

<3

bivibes:

oml

bivibes:

❤️

Astrid1:

You're welcome. <3 <3 Gee now I'm crying xdd

LandonGoma:

lol it's true

Extrinix:

She's seen me cry before- not many people do-

LandonGoma:

aawwww

LandonGoma:

cute couple here

Astrid1:

*doesn't know what to say now* When you do cry I wish I could transport to you and hug you until u stop crying. ;-;

bivibes:

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Extrinix:

Awwwe c:

LandonGoma:

awwwwwww thats cuteeee i ship

bivibes:

mege ship : P

new2luv:

really good keep up the good work

Astrid1:

Thank you c:

Extrinix:

@landongoma wrote:
awwwwwww thats cuteeee i ship
ship me to her, please, ty. c:

LandonGoma:

@extrinix wrote:
@landongoma wrote:
awwwwwww thats cuteeee i ship
ship me to her, please, ty. c:
lol i wish i could help with that but i can't

bivibes:

ok where are yall i can ship to china for 10.00

bivibes:

Xd

Extrinix:

Lmao.

Astrid1:

xd

LandonGoma:

im dead bruuuuh

Extrinix:

*listening to paid my dues and crying bc i love her* totally not crying-

bivibes:

i fr wish i was this good at making poems /songs

LandonGoma:

omg i have the perfect idea but give me until third period and ill post it

Astrid1:

Lol me over listening to I miss the days while crying bc y'all are way too nice. *hugs ext* <3 <3

bivibes:

< 3

Extrinix:

*hugs bk* c: <3 <3

Chunn6:

i like poems

LandonGoma:

i do too

Chunn6:

its real good

Extrinix:

I like poems, but I love Astrid. c:

bivibes:

:>

Astrid1:

I love writing poems. But Not as much as I love Joshy. c:

bivibes:

SHIP

bivibes:

BIG BUT SHIP

Extrinix:

Honestly true... cause you actually kept me c:

bivibes:

butt*

bivibes:

lol

Astrid1:

Yep. I couldn't let someone I love from infinity & back, go.

LandonGoma:

awwwwwwwwwww i wish someone told me that

bivibes:

me to;(

Astrid1:

Dw someday somebody will.

Extrinix:

@astrid1 wrote:
Yep. I couldn't let someone I love from infinity & back, go.
Awe- now im fr crying-

Astrid1:

*wipes ur tears*

bivibes:

but what if that day if when im dead;-;

bivibes:

is

LandonGoma:

how long ya'll been together?

Astrid1:

It won't be when you're dead. It'll happen very soon trust me. (:

LandonGoma:

okay

LandonGoma:

can it be this summer lol

Astrid1:

I can't predict when xd.

bivibes:

can it be tmr . - .

bivibes:

how will it be soon then?

LandonGoma:

right now

LandonGoma:

lol

Astrid1:

It'll be soon. I know it but I can't predict what day, month, or year. ^._.^

LandonGoma:

then how you know soon though

bivibes:

then how will it be soon UnU

bivibes:

uwu

Astrid1:

Because it will ^o-o^

LandonGoma:

im soo confused

bivibes:

what if its 5yrs ;-;

LandonGoma:

lol

LandonGoma:

then it's 5 years

bivibes:

but i dont wanna wait for sombody to hold me and tell me im thirs for 5 yrs;'(

LandonGoma:

agreed

bivibes:

space out my name and you will find out idc abt somthing >-< that most ppl do

LandonGoma:

bi vibes

bivibes:

take away the vibes

LandonGoma:

sooo your bi?

Astrid1:

._. It could be any day, any second, any moment, any year. Somebody will love you, and I may not know who or when but there's somebody out there looking for somebody like you, you'll find them and you deserve them. Bi vibes. <-- Like the name B) Bi 0: Cool, I am bi too 0:

bivibes:

nice :>

LandonGoma:

text me if needed ill be in 2nd period

bivibes:

the thing is nobody likes a boy thats bi ;-;"

Astrid1:

Alright, I'm gonna make sure y'all are in my gc if y'all wanna talk.

bivibes:

oki

bivibes:

nice pfp

Astrid1:

Invited both of you, and thank you.

LandonGoma:

thank you astrid

Astrid1:

No problem (:

bivibes:

thx

bivibes:

hey guys

bivibes:

Astrid1:

jeeeeeeeeeeeez 0:

Astrid1:

ur lag. Delete the extra comment.s ur clicking post too many times at once.

bivibes:

oh

Astrid1:

Yeah.

Astrid1:

Happen's to me sometimes.

bivibes:

its like im not trying to get banned so i was freaking out bc started the daybefore yestday

bivibes:

there

Astrid1:

Yeah it's alright.

bivibes:

thanks < 3

Astrid1:

No problem.

bivibes:

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