This is a piece of "artwork" that I made in Art class, tell me what you think please. If anything bad sticks out let me know.

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Spectrum · Answer

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Honda · Answer

do you want me to be nice or honest?

KiWiPoP1 · Answer

They did say "tell me what you think"

bizaardvark · Answer

oh wow, its interesting, definitely abstract. i'm not sure what the assignment consists of so i cant really judge it properly lol

Spectrum · Answer

@honda wrote:

do you want me to be nice or honest?

I am guessing it is bad.

bivibes · Answer

OML

KiWiPoP1 · Answer

I think it's a pretty nice piece of artwork, although the art is uneven and the best way I can put it is splotchy, its like the colors are oily and not fully colored in, like the heart in the middle for example

bivibes · Answer

IS BEUTIFULL

Honda · Answer

@spectrum wrote:

@honda wrote:

do you want me to be nice or honest?

I am guessing it is bad.

nah i'm just very straightforward. it's actually really good.

newdawn1 · Answer

its not bad its perfect its your master piece dont let any1 tell you differently you created this  and only you

newdawn1 · Answer

nobody else could do it so perfectly

Spectrum · Answer

@bizaardvark wrote:

oh wow, its interesting, definitely abstract. i'm not sure what the assignment consists of so i cant really judge it properly lol

it is actually my name i wrote it using some typefaces I liked, then colored it in with oil pastels, and my teacher cut it up, then we had to re-arrange it into something unique, therefore @bizaardvark it is abstract because the teacher calls it "abstract art project".

bizaardvark · Answer

@spectrum wrote:

@bizaardvark wrote:

oh wow, its interesting, definitely abstract. i'm not sure what the assignment consists of so i cant really judge it properly lol

it is actually my name i wrote it using some typefaces I liked, then colored it in with oil pastels, and my teacher cut it up, then we had to re-arrange it into something unique, therefore @bizaardvark it is abstract because the teacher calls it "abstract art project".

oh thats really cool then! good job :)

bivibes · Answer

it if very very perfect nobody could ever do this better than you good job!!!!!!!! have a wonder ful day<3

smurkio · Answer

@bivibes wrote:

IS BEUTIFULL

*beautiful

Spectrum · Answer

@newdawn1 wrote:

its not bad its perfect its your master piece dont let any1 tell you differently you created this and only you

@newdawn1 wrote:

nobody else could do it so perfectly

@bivibes wrote:

IS BEUTIFULL

Thank you :) I am glad to hear you like it ❤️

bivibes · Answer

thank you smurk

Spectrum · Answer

@bivibes wrote:

it if very very perfect nobody could ever do this better than you good job!!!!!!!! have a wonder ful day<3

Thank you! ❤️🙃

bivibes · Answer

@spectrum wrote:

@newdawn1 wrote:

its not bad its perfect its your master piece dont let any1 tell you differently you created this and only you

@newdawn1 wrote:

nobody else could do it so perfectly

@bivibes wrote:

IS BEUTIFULL

Thank you :) I am glad to hear you like it ❤️

Your welcome and all i said is true <3

newdawn1 · Answer

yeee

KpopAsianDramaFanYT · Answer

Nice, what is it about?

bivibes · Answer

is just abstract

KiWiPoP1 · Answer

I think you mainly need to work on your lines and colors, the shape is there through out the artwork, but when I look at the outlines it rlly does look like crayon ykyk, im not saying im expecting top tier art, and the art isn't fully colored

bivibes · Answer

that dont matter is just what he made even if its not fully colored in

Supreme01 · Answer

WOW its beautiful GOOD JOB!!

Spectrum · Answer

@kpopasiandramafanyt wrote:

Nice, what is it about?

It didn't have a meaning until It was done, at first I had just made a piece of artwork that had things i liked in it, but when it got cut up, it got a new meaning, and I am figuring that out :)

KiWiPoP1 · Answer

@bivibes wrote:

that dont matter is just what he made even if its not fully colored in

I'm just saying

Spectrum · Answer

@supreme01 wrote:

WOW its beautiful GOOD JOB!!

thankyou! ❤️❤️

Supreme01 · Answer

np

iiMaddii · Answer

It's very good,i think it's abstract and i'm not even good at abstract so I have to say this i very good.It's amazing.Good job

smurkio · Answer

its alright

Spectrum · Answer

@kiwipop1 wrote:

I think you mainly need to work on your lines and colors, the shape is there through out the artwork, but when I look at the outlines it rlly does look like crayon ykyk, im not saying im expecting top tier art, and the art isn't fully colored

@kiwipop1 wrote:

I think it's a pretty nice piece of artwork, although the art is uneven and the best way I can put it is splotchy, its like the colors are oily and not fully colored in, like the heart in the middle for example

Thankyou @kiwipop1 I do notice the errors you pointed out, and I will try to fix that from now on. It isn't very easy when you are using oil pastels either :) but thankyou for honest critiscism.

newdawn1 · Answer

lol drowned in respect and love

KiWiPoP1 · Answer

@spectrum wrote:

@kiwipop1 wrote:

I think you mainly need to work on your lines and colors, the shape is there through out the artwork, but when I look at the outlines it rlly does look like crayon ykyk, im not saying im expecting top tier art, and the art isn't fully colored

@kiwipop1 wrote:

I think it's a pretty nice piece of artwork, although the art is uneven and the best way I can put it is splotchy, its like the colors are oily and not fully colored in, like the heart in the middle for example

Thankyou @kiwipop1 I do notice the errors you pointed out, and I will try to fix that from now on. It isn't very easy when you are using oil pastels either :) but thankyou for honest critiscism.

ywywyw :)

newdawn1 · Answer

lmaoo so many quotes

Spectrum · Answer

Thank you all for the constructive criticism and comments! I love to hear it when people like my artwork! ❤️❤️🙃

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