Question

hi im making a summer camp is this letter good and what do i need to chang ss below

Answer 1

Many many grammar errors within the letter, don't capitalize Reading and Choir as those aren't languages, or have numbers after them, the "and" after choir is capitalized. Always capitalize a letter after a period, for example "Mike ate tacos. They were good." When addressing someone in a letter, but a comma after their name, for example "Dear Person,"

Answer 2

thx

Answer 3

remove classes lol

Answer 4

y

Answer 5

The hell?

Answer 6

Stupid litttle girl grow the hell up

Answer 7

ppl like you disgust me

Answer 8

i said remove the work class

Answer 9

guys

Answer 10

cause it doesnt go there

Answer 11

then dont ss the self defans part

Answer 12

your making a summer camp..........

Answer 13

so if i just put classes

Answer 14

you would know where i was talking about

Answer 15

noice

Answer 16

i love it

Answer 17

then do the word after that