Question

Thoughts and Dreams (alt pop)
When I grow up, Do I want to know what I want to be?
Take a seat and let me explain. You see.
The thoughts?, the plan?, i swear its bc im less of a man and more like a boy
Even tho i try i end up being your fan, a toy

People say they are there to help but that's not what you need
You need real people, not those fakes you see on tv
Not some one to mess you up and make you feel weak
A real one, hard one, someone who cares huh?
You say I'm crazy? You must not know that that means.
If i'm crazy then that makes you a villain bc your worst then me

When i grow up this is what i want to be, the real one, hard one, the one who can see
“He works so hard that theres a chance he feels free”
Man i crave that, i hate that, the fact i want to feel free
Like someone isn't here just bc they just have a need

So get off the sack, put on the hat
Walk out the door
That's not you no more
Now that things have changed.
Now the world isn't the same
These thoughts in my brain
You see it through lenses
You know, hoping they see

Its not you who needs the change its the world
People are taught that it's ok not to be “me”
Put on a mask, hide behind a wall
That they built to try and lock out the pain
Don't forget to lock the door and hand me the key
Heh that's comedy, this entire time I thought i was losing but now your trapped in a box
Alone with your thoughts
Now you can call yourself relatable to me


(song number two)

Answer 1

this is really good

Answer 2

thanks!

Answer 3

ofc

Answer 4

yesssirrrrr it's good alex 👍👍

Answer 5

mhmmm

Answer 6

Woah 😎 10/10

Answer 7

thanks sir

Answer 8

ok

Answer 9

^0^makes me want to sing my heart out^0^

Answer 10

Thats very good but maybe put some more heart into it and then maybe fix whats already broken and then maybe your piece will be fixed (as a writter). Add some Rhyme into it and then fix your spelling if needed. I think it's great piece and maybe we can write sometime together. Sometimes when people tell you something you don't mean it but to me it's meaningful in any and every way possible. I hope you keep trying and never stop dreaming or working as yourself. Keep your head up and worry about who you are and not about others.

Answer 11

i dont worry about who i am, its others that worry me, my songs are just my thoughts put on a page, then i decide to share them

Answer 12

Your right but maybe if you worry about yourself then you'll have more come your way (more in a good way)

Answer 13

naw fam, my life is great rn how it is

Answer 14

ok ok maybe more will come your way