Question

ive made new lyrics for a song tell me if you like it sorry theres a couple of bad words in there but ill bleep em out


im getting freestyle on theses shows im gettin the pay load
my daughter in school getting them a's and b's
shes can even do her own a, b's and c's
whatchyo daughter do?
tryna be like 2pac too?
its not gonna work your a disgrace
talking like you own the human race
you cant freestyle like me
you cant even stand up while you pee
hip hipp hippity ratter
its about you and me and all the latter
you cant beat me this a turtle race
im commin up on you with my words spittin in yo face
you cant stop me
i got ho** too who tryna flop me
you think you diss me?
you cant even kiss with a bliss and cant even eat oh whats thats a cracker called? oh yeah ritz

Answer 1

Nahhh cuz that ain it g

Answer 2

And u got the x pfp mane u makin him look bad😭

Answer 3

??

Answer 4

That song garbage

Answer 5

bett i got a song for xxxtentacion

Answer 6

Oh no

Answer 7

ehh

Answer 8

U spelt Bugatti and Audi wrong cuh

Answer 9

And u cant break lungs

Answer 10

And how u sniff lean?

Answer 11

lmao

Answer 12

you can break lungs
dude thats besides the point

Answer 13

How do u break a lung

Answer 14

U can puncture a lung

Answer 15

omg dude stop critsizing me im tryin here

Answer 16

U not tryin hard enough

Answer 17

ight well this is my first song so

Answer 18

Ohh and it’s “criticizing” btw

Answer 19

ok

Answer 20

Hollon and it says “sniffin n**gas and takin they IQ” Why is u sniffin dude mane

Answer 21

Bro ur lyrics don’t make sense

Answer 22

It’s like u did it in 10 minutes

Answer 23

bruh most rap songs dont make sense besides its freestyle

Answer 24

Most rap songs do make sense

Answer 25

ok i wont let someone like you take me downso imma jus go

Answer 26

Bro ur “freestyle” is talkin abt sniffin dudes😭

Answer 27

if you wanna help you can but im tryin here

Answer 28

I could help but yk ion write for ppl I write for myself

Answer 29

i think thats called a producer ski mask the slump god helped xxxtentacion

Answer 30

Well ian no producer

Answer 31

welp

Answer 32

I’m jus tryna say u gotta make them lyrics make sense

Answer 33

yeah i try but sometimes i feel like im writing the same thing

Answer 34

And don’t be talking bout sniffin dudes in ur song

Answer 35

well i didnt mean that literally

Answer 36

Lmaoo

Answer 37

I go hard! Y'all need to stop actin like you slow

Answer 38

I gotta be like the pioneer to this sh** you know

Answer 39

That's why I'm at the lab of the product spittin' you flows

Answer 40

We comin back for everything you owe

Answer 41

Cycle my rap rifle blasts open any beat you throw

Answer 42

Dismantle any MC for free you been warned god

Answer 43

My soul wasn't made to be lost stop for the pause

Answer 44

I'm going to drop the top of the beam on my benz