Question

A SONG IM WRITING, HONEST OPINIONS PLEASE :)

What happened to forever, we were gonna be together till the end of time. But you decided you want better, than me, whats it gonna take to feel some relief.

Im so sick of fighting all my feelings all the time, they are keeping me up every night cuz im not fine...
i just wanted to know that you cared, is it so hard for you to just be there, cuz after all this time i still care, but now i feel nothing but despair

Answer 1

wow, this is really good- it's sad but good.

Answer 2

thats really good!!!!!!!

Answer 3

aw thank you :)

Answer 4

bad break up lol

Answer 5

yw, and oh. if u want to talk just dm me :)

Answer 6

thanks so much

Answer 7

you're very welcome !

Answer 8

Really nice!

We're always here to offer some advice. (:

Answer 9

Yeah, keep up the good work!

Answer 10

This is gr8, keep up the good work

Answer 11

Thank you guys

Answer 12

like.............................................. ITS AMAZING

Answer 13

Yeah, no problem.

Answer 14

Good start

Answer 15

Amazing! I love it keep the good work up!!

Answer 16

yepp its really good, i literally just sang it lol <3

Answer 17

its really good!

Answer 18

Aw you guys are so sweet, thank you all :)

Answer 19

i love the feelings going into the song i think you got real talent

Answer 20

i see future

Answer 21

Nice

Answer 22

needs more rhyme and more taste meaning better lyrics.

Answer 23

thank you guys smmm

Answer 24

your welcome

Answer 25

its short