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Astrid1:

More short poem's. The world cannot change how we love each other. For you are the perfect lover. I wouldn’t spend my whole life with any other. I love her. He speaks as he writes down his final words. Caressing the final bit of life in his mind left of her. Just as he wrote down his favorite line, he saw two bird’s. They had such soft silky fur, he could recall. It reminded him of their first date. When she thought he wasn’t straight. He loved every bit of her but now she’s gone. He’d love her from dusk till’ dawn- He was a wonderful guy. I just couldn’t imagine him without me, now I live in the sky. I see him cry, his suicidal thoughts make him want to die. I’m sorry I can’t be there. But cancer can’t wait, I know love isn’t fair. And- I wish you could just understand. I’ve changed, but you keep pulling the rubber band. You trust others over me. Why can’t you LOVE ME?!! I’ve done everything for you, everything right and you still aren’t here. You still trust your instinct over mine. Stop drinking beer. It’s okay, I’m fine, is what I always say. But I’m never okay. I never tell the truth because I’m constantly scared of you. I hate you! You’ve always been the one who made me blue. Is this what a family is supposed to be like? A mess? You make me want to end my life. Now I love you less. If you trusted me, would you love me? Would you trust me? Would you care? Do you think what I’m doing is fair? It’s not, and I’m tired of having suicidal thoughts. I can’t sit here and love you forever. I wrote these because of what people go through and losing someone is hard, and when you live around nothing but the pain you just lose all faith in others. Then your step-parent's just sit there and say horrible thing's about you because they can. Parents are buttholes. But they're the reason we're still lving. Let's admit it, we hate them at times but we can't get rid of them. Love can be hard to understand, either it's with you or you haven't experienced it. Love is there just wait for it, there's always someone there. Remember, God is making you go through this stuff so you can become a better person, and it's okay to be mad at the things he does because everyone experience's this feeling. We're all gonna lose somebody in life, and that's okay because they're still with us. Trust your instinct, not other's because they aren't living your life.

Astrid1:

This all probably doesn't make sense XD. I was writing this while listening to NF.

bivibes:

LOVE THIS !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

bivibes:

#1

Astrid1:

Thanks xdd

bivibes:

np

alexell:

nice poem

Astrid3:

its very good

Astrid1:

Thanks xd it's not my best sadly xd

bivibes:

wait is there 2astrides?

bivibes:

astrids

Astrid1:

What in the hell why is there an astrid3- ^o-o^

Astrid3:

lol

bivibes:

^_^

Astrid1:

^._.^ idk who u r xd

Astrid3:

nice

Astrid1:

but thank you.

v6mpiresk8ter:

really nice !

Astrid1:

Thanks ig.

Supreme01:

nice poem

XxXNessalulbaddieXxX:

i liked that astrid

Astrid1:

xd thanks.

nettym:

I love it. Always so well-written good jobb :)

bivibes:

keep it up astrid!!!!!

Astrid1:

Yea I sure will.

bivibes:

i support you all the way #bisupportforlife

LandonGoma:

YESSSSSSSSSSSS ASTRID YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS IM IN LOVE WITH ITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT

bivibes:

lamo

LandonGoma:

IT'S PERFECT LIKE YOU ARE ASTRID

bivibes:

hey hey calmdown

bivibes:

we all know that im the insane1 here

Supreme01:

mmmmm k

LandonGoma:

lol

bivibes:

i just realized somthing

bivibes:

WAIT

bivibes:

SCHOOLS DONT CARE ABT OUR MENTLE HEALTH

LandonGoma:

lol

BLOODBATHFEVER:

i like it not bad

bivibes:

landon

Rival:

Great Job Astrid!

Astrid1:

Lmao, thank's <3 <3 💕🖤Astrid🖤💕

uglygirlll1011:

its amazing :)

Extrinix:

Sweet jesus- This hit deep- Least I can't relate becaue the one who wrote it is all I would ever want- c:

SaltTheLoser:

simp

SaltTheLoser:

i hope yall break up

Fan999:

wow- *all I can get out*

Astrid1:

Lol_

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